FIC: I Want Your Whip (Gan Shoucheng/Original Female Character, NC-17)
Title: I Want Your Whip Author: Snowgrouse Fandom: The Longest Day in Chang'an (2019) Pairing: Gan Shoucheng/Xia (Original Female Character) Rating: NC-17 Genre: PWP, Hard BDSM, Dark Romance, Historical Erotic Romance Warnings: The BDSM does get intense. And they act out a ravishment fantasy. Heed the tags on Ao3. Length: ~15 300 words Summary: Xia wants to go deeper, darker, more savage. So, she asks Gan to bring his whip--and later, for him to play the part of a brute hunting her down and ravishing her, punishing her for running away from him.
A/N: Another entry in the Tigers' Dance series, chronicling the passionate, perverse but lethally dangerous affair between General Gan and Xia, Lady Lin (aka Mrs. Lin Jiu Lang). Each story is readable as a standalone, without any knowledge of the show or the fic series (but it helps). My headcast for Xia is Kathy Chow, similar to the way we saw her in The Empress of China.
He picks up a pair of strong, adjustable nipple clamps, made of steel and attached to one another with a chain. In addition to these, he picks up a little box full of the kinds of forked clamps he'd used on her before, that night he'd tormented her in his interrogation chamber: looking not unlike tweezers, these clamps can be adjusted with a sliding ring. They are light enough to be worn on the clitoris, among other places, but they still have a nice pinch; he often uses them on his own nipples when masturbating.
He walks up to her and shows her the stronger clamps.
"Now, these are far more vicious than the ones I used on you earlier," he says, snapping them before her face. "These little beauties will silence and freeze the toughest of men--and women--with pain," he says with sadistic glee. "Only, trouble is, they can't be worn for very long."
"Why?"
"You'll lose sensation in that spot forever," he says breezily and offers her the clamps. "Put them on."
She shudders, but obeys; he shows her how to attach the clamps below the teat, to the lower part of the areola. Smiling, he adjusts the screws himself to tighten the clamps; at first, the pinch is pleasant, but he keeps tightening the screws more and more, his wicked grin widening more and more, until she is shuddering from the pain. The clamps' bite is incredible, sending cold chills all across her body, as if she were turned into ice; indeed, the pain freezes her and makes her unable to speak.
She stands there, her hands balled into fists, and all she knows--all she is is agony; even drawing in a deep breath is impossible, her slightest movement making the chain of the clamps swing heavily between her breasts.
The way he looks at her now is shocking in its unabashed sadistic pleasure: he looks exactly the way he does whenever he's being fellated and close to release. His eyes grow heavy with lust, his lips a little parted, and a huge tremor of arousal ripples through his body; his pleasure is as great as her pain, the very sight of her suffering so erotic to him that he cups his erection through his trousers, squeezing it and hissing in delight.
He lets go of his prick and caresses her lip with his thumb; he looks as if he's about to kiss her, but at the last minute, decides against it and turns his attention to the boxful of forked clamps instead.
"Put your hands behind your back, and spread your legs," he says. "Wider. Let me see that lovely pussy. Good. Now, push out your chest," he murmurs. "Offer yourself to me."
His words send a rush of heat through her, waves of arousal battling with waves of pain; she breathes as deeply as she can, and poses herself according to his desire.
He proceeds to attach two rows of clamps down her front, starting from underneath each breast; he continues these two rows all the way down her ribcage to her belly, ending at the hips. Kneeling, he pulls back her mound and slips one clamp over the root of her clitoris; grinning, he takes in her open-mouthed, wide-eyed shock as he pulls down the ring to make the pinch tighter and tighter. Finally, he attaches six clamps to her pussy's lips, three on each side; here, he makes the clamps especially tight, knowing how easily they might fall off.
She shudders, so exquisite the way she stands there with her legs parted and her whole body taut with tension. He adores that sight, feasting not only upon her pain, but upon her willingness to do this; the fact that this was her idea, her request, her craving for his savagery--oh, it fills him with such love and elation that his chest aches.
He caresses her cheek with the backs of his fingers, coaxing her to look into his eyes, smiling at her in his drunkenness of joy.
"You look beautiful," he murmurs. "So beautiful," he says and gives in to the urge to kiss her; the bitter fragrances of her pain and her fear, the way they minutely transform her body's scent make blood rush straight into his groin. Underneath a faint flavour of tea, he can taste sweet terror and hot arousal upon her tongue, a perverse hunger in the way her body bends against the pain to seek his heat.
He chuckles into her mouth: he's just had a most marvellous idea.
He undoes a long, red ribbon from her hair and laces it through the clamps on her pussy's lips in a crisscrossing pattern.
(Ao3)














