Aerie

Sometimes I stare at the computer screen when the words don’t want to come and I think, “Fuck, who am I kidding? This is terrible writing, and this story is shit, and no one cares, anyway.“  And I close the window and go do something else.

But every now and then I get an amazing, heartfelt, beautiful comment from someone who loved something I wrote, and it reminds me that, at least for that one person, I did write something worthwhile. And so I open the window again and I write one sentence, and then another, and then I start to find my way again.

So on behalf of all fanfic writers everywhere, I want to say thank you, thank you so much, to all of the readers who take the time to leave a comment and tell us that something we wrote mattered to you, that it brightened your day or made you laugh or cry or get horny or whatever.

Also known as the “crisis” or the moment when all hope is lost for your protagonist. The Darkest Hour is when your character hits rock bottom and that “happy ending” just seems unreachable. In this scene, success for your protagonist appears impossible.

What could be a Darkest Hour?

In my opinion, you want your darkest hour to be as dark as possible. Push things to the extreme, create stakes, and hurt your protagonist.  

• Not just any death, but the death of someone your protagonist loves (did your protagonist fail to save them? They now blame themselves.)

• Not just a mild injury, but a serious and life-threatening one (does this injury follow your protagonist into the end of the story? Permanently?)

• Use their fears against them (if they’re afraid of snakes, don’t just have one appear… have them fall into a pit of them.)

• Make your protagonist lose all hope and put their insecurities on full display (they’re embarrassed and ashamed in front of everyone.)

• Attack their mentality just as much as their physicality. (Betrayals, lies, deceptions, self-doubts.)

When does it happen?

Typically, the Darkest Hour occurs right before the climax. Your protagonist is at their all-time low until they have an “a-ha!” moment and gain the hope, strength, or resources to overcome their conundrum and push into the climax of the story.

How does my Protagonist overcome their crisis?

There are numerous ways that your protagonist can trudge out of the mud and gain the strength to continue fighting. They could do it independently and prove themselves a true hero, pull hope from memories and past encounters, receive aid from allies, divine intervention, etc. 

Why is the Darkest Hour Important?

The Darkest Hour is vital to a character’s arc and story because, during their all-time low, their true nature is revealed. Their insecurities, flaws, and fears are all out on the table and the readers get to see them at their most vulnerable. Watching them overcome the crisis shows the reader their growth as a character.

⭐ Show the readers how much your protagonist has grown. If this crisis happened at the beginning of your story, your protagonist would NOT have been able to overcome it. Only through their growth, learning, and plot experiences… are they able to overcome it now.

⭐THIS IS WHERE YOUR PROTAGONIST CAN FINALLY SEE THEIR MISBELIEF/FLAW.

During or after your protagonist’s Darkest Hour is an amazing place for your protagonist to realize the flaw in their thinking (their misbelief). 

Referring back to older posts, your protagonist needs to have a “flaw” or “misbelief”. A false way of thinking that eventually, they will realize is wrong.

• “I’ll never be good enough.” • “Magic is wrong and I will never use it.” • “All aliens are evil and need to be eliminated.” 

This misbelief should have been impeding on your character through the entire plot, causing them conflict and turmoil. After fighting for survival in their darkest moment, they realize they were thinking wrong all along.

• A character reminds your protagonist that they are good enough. • Your protagonist sees magic being used to heal their allies and realizes finally that it can be used for good. • An alien saves your protagonist from a bullet and suddenly your character sees that not all aliens are bad.

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Some love from Nida for the month of love!

When his grip finally began to loosen, though he did not release her, she dropped to her own knees, kneeling before him. “My heart stopped the day you left us,” she whispered to him, and he leaned forward to rest his forehead against hers. “My heart stopped, and my world turned to ash. Everything I have done since that moment has had a singular aim; to find you. To bring you home. To bring you back to me.”

One by one, they’d fallen.

Let expanse contract!

Ciprys always wanted to fall in love - she just never expected to do it with an overly-serious, humorless Xaela twice and more her size.

A romantic, Ciprys would have told you that the key to her heart was long, moonlit walks, oodles of flowers and chocolates, soulful looks, poetry declaimed by starlight, and other such courting nonsense right up until she generously accepted the suit. Obviously, any man she fell in love with would be a sensitive soul, devout and generous, maybe even intellectual. Certainly nothing like the boorish adventurers she found herself surrounded by.

It turns out that what it really takes to win the heart of Ciprys Dreamweaver is a bunch of sheep, a flailing axe, and an offer of buuz that she (regretfully) had to turn down. While the Xaela had an unexpectedly sweet nature (her parents had had very interesting - and unflattering - things to say about the Steppe tribes), he really hadn't been her type. Being, you know. Xaela. And all... warrior-like. Blood-splattered. Practical.

Handsome. Shhh.

And yet.

Turns out that maybe what she thought would win her heart... wasn't anything close to it at all.

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Ooops.

Yuck, now you got me blushing. 

Cheeks so red when the blood start rushing.