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Main Fandoms

-dc(the flash specifically)

-forsaken

-the last guest(HEAVY on that)

-dandys world

-Lego Ninjago partially

-fnaf

-Hetalia (I'm sorry. I know. )

-Yaleokre(sorry If I misspelled it)

Kins

-Glisten

-Feliks Łukasiewicz

-a bit ink from underverse?

I might not respond to comments or reblogs bc I'm a bit antysocial. I'm sorry if I ignored something I just procrastinate responding and uh... After 3 days it's not worth it feels too awkward to respond.

And my sona

1. The lack of hospital(actually the lack of in general any other buildings that are not the sleep area for Guest's. Though I guess there technically isn't a need for that much? Deppends how the camp functions)The camps have been in action with no new additions for presumably at least a year? And I'm guessing the last 5 years or so have not added too many people. Surviving in that type of conditions for that long is just highly unlikely(if not impossible), the lack of any hospital(even with the awful conditions) makes it just... Well not possible. It's not like it would be unrealistic either, most soviet and nazi camps had them(can't speak for any others bc I don't know enough)though obviously conditions there were awful(the official Auschwitz-Birkenau museum talks about that if anyone is curious, it's easy to find)

2 why is the fenced area so big? They have been forced to work there for years, and yet they still have trees to cut? It would make more sense for guest's to leave the camp for work under supervision, rather than fance off an area too big for the becons to control. Rose also shouldn't be able to get this close to the fence, unless the camp is in some middle of nowhere desert, where it doesn't matter if she escapes. Like if she'd jump over she could make it to the civilisation easily(and the bacons do have a resistance so she could've had someone that either helped her back to robloxia, or let her live at their home), or survive in the forest. If the becons have always had controls this shity there would've been guests that managed to escape, and get to robloxia.

Alternatively if the camps were to be in the middle of nowhere(which they aren't since both zara and jez made it on foot if I remember correctly)then there should've been buildings for bacon guards to live in.

last thing that isn't a complaint but uh, well with the second one, jez and zara still have to meet rose somehow, and help guests of course. My ideas for those plot points are

Well if guest's work outside of the camps, the resistance could leave small aid products or food for them to find.

As for Rose meeting Zara, itd could be in the camps hospital?

And Jez well probably too but there is a second option

He could've impersonated a specialised worker. During ww2 in camps like Auschwitz there were instances of Forced Laborers being made to work in camps. They didn't get a say in the matter, they weren't prisoners though, like they had absolutely no power there and were taken to just fulfil work as for instance engineers. They got special passes and were able to leave the premise after their workday. It was complicated however they did sometimes bring help to the victims.

Making him an officer or anything of the sort(even as a cover) would be a very very bad choice that is just wrong on so so many level

I'm contemplating sending this to the writing discussion in tlgr server but Idk if this isn't crossing some sort of a boundary or rule

Also I'm not talking about how they could be portrayed in a more naturalistic way. Like I'm not sure I want to say much rn about how to make them worse(as in yk more horrifying). See cause that would be balancing on a very thin line, it's easy to make a mishap, say too much, make it to distasteful/disgusting and so on or make too much references to lives of very real people that have suffered an awful fate in one of the real concentration camps, making them just a reference in a roblox movie is a no go.