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hi! You commented on my story ‘Jaded’, I’d love to hear some things you felt could use some polishing if you have the time!

Hi! Thanks for asking 😊

Overall it’s a strong piece what stood out most is your imagery and the central metaphor. A few areas that could be polished are tightening some repetition for better pacing and making the emotional progression a bit more grounded so each shift feels more intentional.

If you want, I can point out a few specific lines that could be refined 👍

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