UnknownSprings

⟢ "You're not afraid of me." - "Should I be." - "Most people are." - "I'm not most people." - "No. You really aren't."

⟢ "I've been alive for three hundred years and you're the first thing in a very long time that felt like a reason."

⟢ "What are you." - "Dangerous." - "To me specifically." - "...no. Not to you. Never to you."

⟢ "I don't have a heartbeat." - "I know." - "That doesn't bother you." - "Your hands are warm. Nothing else matters."

⟢ "I've watched civilizations fall. I've watched everything end and begin again. I have never once felt like this."

⟢ "You should run." - "From you?" - "From what I am." - "What you are is currently making me coffee. I think I'll stay."

⟢ "I'm not human." - "I know." - "You've always known." - "Since the beginning." - "And you stayed." - "And I stayed."

⟢ "I've done terrible things." - "Before me." - "Yes." - "Are you going to do them again." - "Not if I can help it." - "Then we're okay."

⟢ "You smell like—" - "If you finish that sentence I'm leaving." - "—home. I was going to say home."

⟢ "I've been pretending to be human for so long I forgot what it felt like to just... be. Until you."

⟢ "What happens when you get angry." - "You don't want to know." - "I'm still here aren't I." - "...yes. You are."

⟢ "I can hear your heartbeat." - "What does it sound like." - "Right now? Terrified." - "Right now? Yeah." - "Of me." - "Of how much I—yeah. Of you adjacent things."

⟢ "You're immortal." - "Yes." - "What do you do with someone like me." - "I don't know. I've never wanted to before."

⟢ "I've eaten kings. I want you to know that before this goes further." - "Noted. Were they terrible kings." - "Mostly." - "Then we're fine."

⟢ "I don't know how to do this. Any of this. I've never—" - "Neither have I." - "You're human." - "And you're not. We're both figuring it out."

⟢ "Stay." - "I always leave eventually." - "Stay anyway." - "You'd age. You'd—" - "Stay with me anyway."

⟢ "I can feel everything you feel." - "Everything?" - "Every single thing." - "That's—" - "Overwhelming? Yes. Worth it? Also yes."

⟢ "You're the most dangerous thing I've ever encountered." - "I'm making you soup." - "The most dangerous thing I've ever encountered is making me soup and I don't know what to do with that."

⟢ "I've loved people before. I've watched them die. I swore I wouldn't do it again." - "And." - "And then there was you. And I'm apparently a fool regardless of how many centuries I've had to learn better."

⟢ "What do you want from me." - "Nothing you haven't already given." - "Which is." - "Everything. You've already given me everything and I don't think you even noticed."

⟢ "You make me want to be something worth being."

⟢ "I will still be here long after you're gone. I want you to know I've already decided that's worth it. You're worth the grief of it."

Here are some things that may happen when your character realizes they are in love with someone. These can be totally obvious or be super subtle. I think that can depend on your character's mannerisms and personality! Have fun writing!

Notice everything. They start to notice things about the other person. Have freak outs when they notice they notice. They notice nervous ticks, small details no one else notices, patterns.

Hyperawareness. They become hyperaware of their own bodies and what they are doing as well as the other person’s body. They are unable to think about anything other than how close the person is. What they smell like.

They may change their behavior. They may become mean, guarded or distant. They may embrace it, try to see how the other person feels. All that matters is nothing is as natural as it had felt like before. They may realize they want to share everything with that person or notice that they have been sharing everything and stop. Inconsistencies may occur where they are normal one day and distant the next while they try to make it appear like everything is the same.

If I have to read about the perfectly angular face of the MMC I swear to gosh I will...continue reading it because I'm a sucker for a cliche. Anyways, here are some other words to use instead.

Bloated

Sharp

Bony

Chiseled

Delicate

Soft / feminine

Elongated

Pinched

Hawkish

Narrow

Ratlike

Round

Sunken

Square

Wide

Wrinkly

To be honest, I don't want to hear about the characters doing complex hair styles. A lot of the ones I've seen are not realistic and seem silly to me. Here are some other options to describe hair:

Bald

Braided

Bristly

Cropped

Curly

Ringlets

Disheveled

Dreadlocks

Filthy

Matted

Frizzy

Greasy

Limp

Long

Short

Mohawk

Oily

Up-do

Pony tail

Half up half down

Silky

Topknot

Messy

Wavy

Wispy

Tussled