I feel like the peer review was a good learning experience, by teaching how us as students can review other papers other than our own. Â When reading each others papers it can give us a different view on them, by listening how they are written out objectively and not by reading to yourself which you would I feel make sense in your head but possibly not to others. Â Then by doing that you can figure out if your wording is logical. Â
When answering the questions I think this will make you think objectively about your peer's work and then help you figure out how to help them in a positive manner, which will hopefully help them better their work. Â By putting down things that they have done well maybe that will encourage them to write the best they can. Â By also showing where things need work that will help them better their paper. Â
On one of my reviews they say that I wrote things that were clear and understandable about my life moment. Â I should also go through and re-read somethings to revise sentences for their structure. Â Another thing is that some of the terms used not everybody knows because they might not play an instrument. So I should probably define those terms clearer. Â
On the other peer review they didn't feel that any work was needed, that it was easy to read and comprehend. I feel as tho more could have been added there. They did write positive things, like the descriptiveness of feelings and the procedures I used while teaching.
When I make the changes i'll define some musical tools and terms so that if you didn't know anything about music it would make it understandable. Â Some of the sentences that I wrote seem to end randomly or go off on a tangent most likely because i lost train of thought. Â I will re-read my paper out loud to myself so then I could maybe catch anything that is not written the right way.
I think the these peer reviews are set up is a nice idea, with the reading of each others work out loud and then going over things that need work. Â I do think that maybe more time is needed to think about answers when you're responding to the questions as I think the one class is not enough.