Looking for a Star Wars Beta reader or maybe a comment on this post. I am in the process of planning a Star Wars Fanfic, been in the planning for at least 6 months and have hashed out a basic story/series. However, I am swamped at the backstory for theMale OC, which is a son of Obi-Wan Kenobi and Miraluka woman named Talonn Tirall (Yes, those Tiralls).
I have several backstory's created where he can start out and how it affects the entire story moving forward. I really at this time just need someone to tell me: That one is good, the others just are terrible, here is some information about the character and the top three options:
Main character (placeholder name Michael O’Meara—totally not set in stone) is a Miraluka-Human hybrid, secret son of Obi-Wan Kenobi and a Miraluka named Talon Tirall. He's a bit of a goofball jock with some slight bully tendencies—think charming but rough around the edges, kind of cocky but hiding some real emotional struggles (mainly his identity and masculinity).
Important detail: he's a "void" in the Forcee, cut off and disconnected, he's there but he's not there.
Backstory Options
Option A – Baby in a Pod like Superman (1970s Texas):
-Born two years after Luke and Leia
-Mom sends him off in an escape pod to hide him from the Empire.
-Crash-lands in rural Texas around 1970-1971; adopted by locals.
-Grows up normal, until teenage years when Force weirdness starts.
-Emotional, identity-focused arc about finding who he really is.
Option B – Stasis & Memory Wipe (1984 Texas):
-Born in 33 BBY, briefly Padawan (or friend) to Anakin Skywalker.
-Put into stasis right before Order 66 (reason unknown).
-Clones accidentally launch pod; crashes in Texas, 1984.
-Memory wiped, new identity implanted; adoptive family's memories altered.
-At 17, everything starts breaking down—visions, strange powers, flashbacks.
-Darker, psychological mystery vibe, heavy identity-crisis story.
Option C – Stasis & Adopted Brother of Leia Organa:
-Born in 33 BBY, briefly Padawan (or friend) to Anakin Skywalker.
-Placed into stasis right before Order 66 (unknown reason).
-Eventually found and adopted by Bail Organa, becoming Leia’s younger adoptive brother.
-Raised politically alongside Leia; always feels out of place.
-Cut off from the Force completely, a "void" in the Force.
-At 17, he begins to uncover his true past, heritage, and the reason behind his Force disconnection.
-Focuses heavily on political intrigue, sibling bonds, identity, and belonging.
The story is a Luke Skywalker x Original Male Character Story/Series, I know those aren't insanely popular like Dinluke or Luke x Mara Jade and might not be everyone's cup of tea. I want the character to fit in and be perfect or take over the main plot of Star Wars, he has his own off to the side while the main plot is happening, the stories intertwine, Luke is still the main hero. Please DM me or comment if you are interested.
