How do I make a calm and collected character in a very overwhelming situation?
Writing a character who remains composed when everything around them is falling apart is a hard thing to do, especially since I’m sure a lot of us don’t feel that way when we’re in tricky situations. My significant other is cool as a cucumber when something is genuinely stressful, and I’m in constant awe of his ability to just be calm and take charge.
When it comes to writing a calm character in an overwhelming situation, the balancing act comes when you want them to feel grounded and in control, but not so detached that they seem robotic or unfeeling. The trick is understanding that being calm isn’t an absence of emotion; it’s managing those emotions in a way that serves the situation they’re in.
Understand where their calm comes from
Before you can write a calm character convincingly, you need to understand why they’re calm. Their composure ought to have a source. Does their calm come from:
Training or experience? Military personnel, emergency responders, or anyone who has faced repeated crises may have learned to compartmentalise and therefore find it easier to remain calm in situations outside of their normal experiences.
Personality? Some people are naturally less reactive and process their emotions internally rather than externally.
A coping mechanism? Their calm might be a learned defence against trauma or chaos in their past.
Responsibility? They may stay calm for others because someone has to, and they’ve taken on that role.
Neurodivergence? Many neurodivergent people may panic or stress at the little things in their lives, but when something genuinely big and dramatic happens, they’re suddenly calm and collected as adrenaline and dopamine flood their systems.
Understanding the root of why they are calm will help you write it authentically because those reasons will feed into their entire characterisation. It will feel genuine in the moment because you really know your characters.
Separate internal experiences from external behaviour
What a character shows and what they feel are not always the same thing. Even the most composed person experiences physiological stress responses that might not be visible to others. Their bodies react even if their behaviour doesn’t.
You can show this through:
Physical sensations like a racing heart, a tight chest, or icy hands.
Controlled breathing to ensure they have a strong and calm voice when they speak.
Micro-reactions like a brief pause, tightening their jaw, or a moment where their eyes flicker before they respond.
An internal monologue that lets readers into their head where the storm is happening, even as they appear calm externally.
Duality helps to create tension and makes characters feel three-dimensional rather than emotionless. Just because other characters can’t see the emotions doesn’t mean that someone doesn’t experience them. It can also make a good revelation later on down the line if someone misinterprets a calm character as cold and distant.
Use their actions to show competence
Calm characters often show their composure by doing rather than feeling. When chaos erupts, they act. They do things deliberately and with calculation. You can show them:
Assessing the situation methodically.
Prioritising what needs to happen first.
Giving clear, steady instructions to others.
Focusing on solutions rather than dwelling on the problem.
Stepping up to take charge, whether it is reluctantly or unasked.
Use strategic cracks in their facade
To make your composed character feel real, build in moments where their control slips, even just a little. This might look like:
A sharp edge to their voice that they quickly smooth over.
Hands that stay calm but finally start to tremble when the crisis is over.
A private moment where they come close to a breakdown.
Delayed emotional reactions that surface later.
Moments of vulnerability make a character’s composure more impressive. Readers will understand that their calm is earned and doesn’t come without effort.
