So I wanted you guys opinion on my first poem for tumblr . So like I’m a youtuber & I also write poems this is just the little snippet that I posted for now

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Why you do me like that?

you know where you pushed me to the side to make yourself look better

You know when you told me you loved me but showed me something way different

Why you do me like that?

You know where you called me beautiful but verbally abused me all in one

you know where you told me i wasn’t shit & I got use too it

Why you do me like that?

You know where I was hoping you uplifted me but instead you put me down

So down I felt like nothing else matter and i wanted to all end there

I was so caught up in making sure you were okay I wasn’t making sure I was okay