Hi! I came across your bold last night and spend until about 3am and then 10am-2pm binge reading all of Chicagos finest and just wow- I knew I wouldn’t be able to stop for on the go comments because it was too good to even consider taking a small break.
You write these characters so complex and so so in character. You’ve added a whole character without taking away the base of the show and integrated her so naturally, that I could be told yeah this is the written version of the show and id believe it.
I’m in love with carmy and Tony’s relationship and how well it builds up and how fluffy it makes me feel! I love the crosssed worlds of syd and the beef bringing Tony back into their world and how they already have connections to the bear in a way that doesn’t feel like a fanfic, it just feels like a natural thing to happen.
I love the conversations and how they flow so seamlessly like in the show. I love that there’s the half spoken conversation but we can still say that yeah we can tell what’s left unsaid and we get inner dialogue that makes sense for a mentally ill person with self worth issues (speaking from experience) I also love how absolutely down bad carmy is for Tony.
I can’t wait to read more!! and could I be added to the taglist?
Babes, of COURSE you're getting added to the taglist-- Fingers crossed that shit works though, sometimes the tagging system decides to explode on me. LOVE tumblr,,,
ANYWAYS. I should be keeping a counter of how many sleep schedules I've ruined. I think we're at 5-6, and that's just from what I've been told in my inbox. WOO BOY.
That really means the world, sometimes I definitely have wondered, when putting Chip into the Bear universe, if it's sort of taken away from the actual plot of the show, because they change so many problems/dynamics with their presence. it means a lot that you think they're well integrated and keeps to the essence of the show !! thank you thank you !!
Carmen and Tony are very fluff. they're so FLUFF. except for when they are fighting in which case it is. hell. it's a very all or nothing duo, i suppose. And thank you, I LOVE writing a fic where the OC has a backstory that unravels itself naturally!! so i'm glad it's fun to read HAHA
I am so lucky to have the privilege of being on paper writing dialogue, because GOD, it is SO MUCH HARDER to write dialogue like The Bear in a t.v format, because it is alll so 'left unsaid' dialogue. And I HAVE THE BENEFIT of getting to tell you straight up what is meant. those guys just have to PRAY. i'd love to see their scripts and see what their stage direction looks like honestly. wonder if they inject emotion in there.
I'M YAPPING FOR TOO LONG INSTEAD OF JUST SAYING THANK YOU, AND I'M SORRY !!! THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR THOUGHTS I APPRECIATE YOUUU !!