Wait I have to say it was brilliant, as by genre and trope it was already clear that it wasn't gonna have a happy ending, but still the way you ended you won my heart , I kept thinking while reading that 'now he'll change', 'now he'll realise' but no he's such a dick I have to say it. And my baby Rachel I love her so much , my sweet girl, oc love for her was so heartwarming and Florian my child , the way oc beg for him it reminds me of my mother , how pure a mother love can be for her baby wow, and the ending was perfect emotional clear but senseable, thankyou so much for writing such an amazing story.
Oh wow, reading this literally brought tears to my eyes. I love Rachel very much too. She’s the kind of girl anyone would love, you know. We didn’t really get to see much of a connection with Florian, but whatever we did see was enough, I guess. You completely captured exactly what I was trying to convey! and yes, Jungkook really proved he didn't deserve her mercy! I'm so incredibly happy that Rachel and Florian found a place in your heart. Thank you sweetheart for this comment.









