Hi Ginger! Hope you're having a great day! UNDERWORLDFM is an upcoming 8x8 supernatural skeleton rp based on the war between vampires and lycans in modern day nyc with royal & fantasy influences! We're excited about opening & wanted to know if we could bother you for a quick opinion! Thank you so much in advance for your time!
yes ofc !Β please keep in mind that everything i have written below is my PERSONAL OPINION and intended to provide constructive criticism. if anyone is interested in this rp, they should check it out for themselves.
the url and icon gave me eerie vibes, which is perfect considering this is a supernatural/horror rp ! i think the fcs that the admins use are also perfect for the rp. i was also drawn by the 8x8 as i love smaller rp groups, so this is something you can definitely use to your advantage.Β
iβm in love with the theme !! i think red and black is always a good color combo and this combo fits well with a supernatural rp. it did take me a while to find your links on the sidebar but iβm also an idiot so. i noticed that one of your links (the last/fourth one) does not link to anything so i would suggest perhaps linking that to your plot or guidelines. itβll make it easier and quicker for anyone interested in the rp to find out what it is about or what the rules are.Β
the graphics are absolutely beautiful gosh iβm so *insert heart eyes* ! going back to what i said about the color combo, i love how your graphics follow the same red and black palette. i also really love the graphics used for each different skeleton; it makes each character that much more intriguing.Β
this plot page is so well-written and the language used is definitely drawing me in. i appreciate how you guys have sectioned them off, as well as having highlighted each supernatural being. the summary and synopsis section at the end is a quick way for anyone interested to get a grasp of the rp, so itβs great that you guys included this.Β
overall/final suggestions
honestly i think u guys are gonna do amazing. i see a lot of anon asks so thatβs def a sign that people are interested and looking into applying. the skeletons look good, the plot seems well put together, and the entire rp is off to a great start. best of luck with opening !Β
