Hi I’m really sorry about pinging you like this but I wanted to let you know that your story Twisted Wonderland: Our Precious Treasure has inspired me somewhat to write my own thing of sorts and I wanted to hear your thoughts.
The Protagonist is Yuu Fechín who is 17 years old, 178 cm tall, and is very pale but muscular. Yuu hasn’t seen sunlight on a regular basis until he got to NRC. Short black hair that’s sort of “feathery” according to Grim. Very striking blue eyes.
Much more reserved and quiet when in comparison to Ace or Grim but still polite. Shrewd and observant. Has strong protective instincts. Versatile when it comes down to lodging and income, such as when Yuu has to bunk at Savanaclaw he deems the storage room acceptable. A good judge of character and can act similarly to an older or more mature sibling. Yuu is slow to anger most of the time and has excellent control over his temper but if you stomp on the right nerves he’ll be ready to snap your neck. If Azul had stepped on one more of Yuu’s nerves the next day’s headlines would have read: “Octopus Mob Boss found dead in Miami” when irritated has quite the sharp tounge
Meticulous when it comes to appearance and items, (his total amount of personal items is enough to fit in a duffel bag with room to spare) his posture is almost picture perfect. Wears these military-esque fingerless gloves to help him grip items.
When Yuu arrives at NRC he can only remember his name (Yuu Fechín) but the word geode is in his mind. The only thing aside from the ceremonial robe is a strange headpiece similar to the mic/earbud combo you see in theatres.
Yuu’s memories slowly return over the arcs. Heartslabyl causes the memories of his boss and her dedication to the people she chose to protect and her strict way of ruling them. Savanaclaw returned the memories of the wasteland and the Marauders who have turned on common decency and their fellow man in favor of self centered survival. Octavinelle returns the memories of the people trapped in deals that only end in misery and despair with the only possible escape being death and the weasels who duped them. Scarabia returns the memories of brotherhoods forged through blood, sweat, tears, and time, with allies that span the globe. Pomefiore reminds Yuu of the position he holds and the weight that comes with it. Ignihyde gives clarity by showing Yuu his home and how it got that way and just how much effort was put into rebuilding. Diasomnia gives the second to last chunk that Yuu’s home does have magic it’s not the same type but there is magic nonetheless. And the final piece of Yuu’s memory is that of his magic that fundamental part of who he is.
I didn’t have any specific characters that I twisted Yuu from but I think that fits considering that while Yuu has a connection with Twisted Wonderland through the friends he made while at NRC it’s not his home.
Yuu instead has a more broader theme around knights and chivalry. Since of all of the kids Yuu has the strongest moral compass he actually follows rather consistently. His weapon of choice being a rapier either metal or forged by magic. And is part of what is essentially the army having the rank equivalent to that of Lieutenant Colonel. If there are any characters Yuu can be tied closer too it would be The Black Knight from Monty Python and Weiss Schnee from Rwby. Though that’s mostly due to color schemes injuries and references.
Yuu can be incredibly blunt with his words to either your detriment or benefit. He can and will shoulder more then he can carry since that’s what his boss did and still does. When he fights it will be until either he falls unconscious or drops dead or he’s managed to drive off/kill whatever he’s fighting. Yuu is also stubborn as all hell it takes a lot for him to give up on something or to realize that he is in the wrong or something he believes in fundamentally is incorrect.
Added fun facts: 1) Yuu can barely cook and only manages due to following the directions perfectly. 2) Yuu’s hobby is ice skating. 3) Yuu wakes up at 5:00AM every morning and goes to bed at 10:00PM. 4) he loses his entire left forearm to sepsis which was caused by the arm being broken while he was strung up by rusted barbed wire. 5) has a fair amount of scars and gains several more when he fights Grim, then gets captured and tortured by Marauders and barely a week out of getting out of the hospital fights off a sea dragon and nearly shatters his own soul from the strain. 6) durning the fight with the sea dragon Yuu gets some rather nasty looking scars on the left side of his face. 7) he gets Leona to cooperate by singing “I know a song that gets on everybody’s nerves” for the entire night at the top of his lungs and almost tears his vocal cords doing so.
