For the FanFic Ask Game: F, H, P, T, please! (I know I'm very late to the party, but I adore your DWP fanfiction, particularly Clean Rooms and Dirty Lights, the Land Fathoms and Legible series. The Doubt fics are gorgeous too. Your work is full of beauty tinged with sadness. So yeah, big fan.)
Thank you, @thisandsomuchmore, for the ask and for the kind words about my writing!
F: Share a snippet from one of your favorite dialogue scenes youâve written and explain why youâre proud of it.
This scene is from âLightyearâ (final part of the Land Fathoms series, Miranda/Andy), and Iâm proud of it because I wanted a lot to change in a brief, casual moment, and for it to feel casual, even easy, but not so casual that a reader might question the momentâs importance, the way it feels momentous for Miranda and Andy.
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The week before Thanksgiving, Miranda arrives pulling a large suitcase. She never over-explains, but tonight she says, âSo I donât have to keep going back to the house for clothes all week. Marcia has the week off, anyway. And I hired a courier service to deal with the Book.â
âTo have it delivered here, you mean?â
Miranda nods. âIs that all right? It seemed easier.â
âYeah, of course,â Andy says slowly. Itâs incredible to think that, for the first time in decades, neither of Mirandaâs assistants will have to worry about delivering the Book. She ushers Miranda through the front door, reaches for the suitcase. Even on wheels, itâs heavy, and sheâs impressed that Miranda just climbed three flights with the thing.
âYou wouldnât happen to have a garment steamer, would you?â Andy can hear now that Miranda is a bit winded.
âUm, I have an iron. As you know. Is that similar?â
Miranda rolls her eyes. âNo matter. Itâll wait till morning.â She heads to the couch, where she collapses with a sigh, kicks off her shoes, and closes her eyes.
She looks so worn out and peaceful and relieved to be where she isârelieved to be home, Andy realizesâthat Andy hesitates before walking over and taking a seat on the couch next to her. But she must understand, and, suddenly, that has to happen now. âMiranda?â she says tentatively. âAre you moving into this apartment?â
Mirandaâs eyes flash open and she sits up straighter. She glances around. âNot intentionally,â she says.
âBut you are, arenât you?â
There is a long pause. âI think I must be.â She raises a hand to her lips.
âUm,â Andy starts. âYeah. Thatâs great, but we should probably talkââ
âYes,â Miranda says quickly.
But neither of them say anything. Miranda breaks the silence first, not with words but with a bark of laughter.
âYou can move in. You can move in times a thousand. But I want the loveseat,â Andy says. âThe one from your study. I canât believe Iâve been back this long and havenât gotten to fuck you in it once.â
H: How would you describe your style?
My goal is to write things that could actually happen, and my hope is that when a reader reads one of my stories, they feel on some level like the moments in the story did happen--because then, somewhere in the world, they did. *hugs all queer women*
For me, in terms of style, that means writing concretely and (hopefully) concisely enough that the description doesnât get out of pace with the plot. I feel like this is the least pretty sentence about craft ever, but itâs what I try to do?
P: Are you what George R. R. Martin would call an âarchitectâ or a âgardenerâ? (How much do you plan in advance, versus letting the story unfold as you go?)
Iâm an architect until I reach the point where I have to garden. For any story longer than a couple thousand words, I almost always plan a checklist of scenes--some with action and description, others that are simply a mood or emotional touchpoint I need to achieve at that spot in the story. I usually stick to it pretty well, especially during the first draft, but finally I get to a point where it feels like Iâm not propelling the writing but the writingâs propelling me, and at that point itâs safe to rely less on the outline and more on the actual thing Iâm building. Safe to meander, and expand on unexpected places, so long as I know I can return to the checklist if I need to make sure my larger intentions are met.
More rarely, I start out as a gardener because an image or idea comes to me and I want to work to capture it, and then once I start to lose focus I zoom far enough out that I can create an outline.
T: Any fandom tropes you canât stand?
While I tend to enjoy fic set in different time periods than canon, Iâm generally not a fan of high school and college AUs. I find characters compelling because of the experiences theyâve had, because of the way they look and act, because of the living Iâve done. There are well-written high school and college AUs, but a high school or college student is never going to realistically retain the experiences that made the original character interesting in the first place.
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