Picked up Thief again since MHA is coming to a close, and I noticed that the new version of Thief is somewhat toned down on the vulgarity and sexualness. I mean this in the most respectful way possible with no shade to the og version.... I think it's a huge improvement. It makes the other aspects of your writing more striking. As much as I enjoy erotica, I personally find that it can throw off the momentum and tone on certain occasions. You have SUCH a talent for conveying emotion, tension, and angst that sometimes I'm more excited for those parts than the smutty parts. The extra dialogue is amazing and Dabi's emotional range seems wider which makes him all the more interesting and three dimensional. You're doing a phenomenal job on the rewrite 🙏 can't wait to see more <3
Nice! I’m glad you like the new changes. I wrote the original to expel a bunch of trauma and junk from my brain. Coming back to it years later, after processing a lot of my own shit, I’m having a lot of fun tweaking details around! More to come for sure.
