First arc was so fun, and so devastating. I got super invested in it and will remain so when you post more. The changes you made to threats (ex. Brokenstar dying book 1, Tigerclaw not becoming a bigger. Forest wide issue, even gping away with scourge near the start of the book) never felt rushed and only helped add to everything going on, especially how they impacted firestar and his ptsd. One of if not the best rewrite ive read, and i cant wait for more :)
And here, have a cat tax. Her warrior name in your universe would be Mistthroat or Mistbelly
Thank you for the support and the cat! This book caused me a hell of a lot of mental turmoil, which makes it all the more satisfying to be done with the fucking thing - and the entire first arc of this series, on top of it! Hopefully you'll like the second arc as well. Either way, thank you for having been here on the first leg of this journey.