A Twenty-One excerpt
I don't remember if I posted this at some point. I probably did. But anyway, Iâm in a mood, and I love this horrible little scene Iâve written so warnings for torture, gore, and character death. This scene is mature, and probably horrifying as itâs based in horror. I hope the âRead Moreâ line actually works since it doesnât always seem to work. I donât really like tagging people for this, but if youâre okay being tagged in things like this, please let me know so I can add you in the future. Itâll be considered a horror writing tag.
Camillaâs hands shook as she pushed the unlock button on her car keys. Nothing happened. No unlocking sound. She gripped the keys tighter as the rain was forthcoming. The key slipped around the lock until it slipped out of her hands. She gasped and scrambled for them in the puddle of accumulating mud surrounding her car. A swatch of metal hit her fingertips and she latched onto it just in time to feel a boot against her ribs. Her head hit the car side door, the rest of her body splashing water all over her. She buckled in pain, sure something cracked as pain shot through her body. The figure pulled her up, opened the door, and pushed her into the passengerâs side. The car roared to life and she could barely see where they were going.
The person seated beside her was tall, with a wicked smile and curly wet hair plastered to his forehead. The hilt of a knife poked out of his belt just barely within reach. Her vision blurred as she tried to straighten herself out. Warren glanced at her briefly, one hand on the wheel, the other fingering the hilt of the knife. âI only came by for a quick chat.â
âA quick chat? Youâre going to murder me, arenât you.â
Warren stopped the car in an empty lot and turned to face her. âOnly if you push me too far. This isnât something for you to take on. You really should listen to the others. Donât be a hero and all that.â
âDid you pull those lines from YA novels?â Camilla spat. She could feel the fire in her hand building, but a car was not the best place for a fight. The door to her car unlocked and she got out cautiously, watching her back. Warren followed suit, his shit-eating grin practically splitting his face in half. His suit, distinguishing him as a professor of the college was stained with mud. He glanced at it, âKidu will hate me for ruining it.â
Warren took a few steps around the car. Camilla backed up with each one.
âIf you donât back off, youâll be forcing my hand. And no one will stop me.â
âIâll stop you!â She shouted. The fire building in her hand fizzled out and turned to steam. She willed the water around her to condense and form a bubble surrounding Warrenâs head. He struggled and tried desperately to splash the water away.
Camilla struggled to keep herself upright. The twinge of pain in her side made her crumple to her knees, but she kept the bubble of water surrounding Warrenâs head. Something slammed into her side and she lost all control. Hard metal, cool against her bare arms. Her whole body broken and in pain. She turned her head as much as she could manage. Heim stood over her with a shovel.
Warren coughed and sputtered and cursed somewhere away, and she felt a sharp object dig into her shoulder blade. She tried to scream, but the wind was knocked out of her and she could hardly breathe without hyperventilating. Warren drew closer, blood staining the front of his shirt. He pulled the knife out of his shoulder and brought it dangerously close to her throat.
âNot here,â Heim hissed. âTake her to the place. To Kiduâs. You wonât have to worry about anything there.â She felt the sensation of being lifted, the feeling of being teleported to the Qualian plane, the cold placement of metal cuffs on her wrists and ankles.
âDo you understand how many come after me?â Warren circled Camillaâs broken form on the hard slab. âThe organization has people tailing me constantly. They think I donât know. In the end, most of them find their way here. No witnesses.â He grabbed something from the wall that sounded like metal grating against metal. âYou just had to insert yourself into the whole mess. Youâre not right for Denthos, a little cat like you.â
Camilla made a weak effort to cast fire, condense water, do anything. Above her, a giant pendulum blade swung lazily in place. The metal rubbed her skin painfully until her wrists burned.
Warren smiled. âYouâll be the first real warning to them. The first example Iâll let them see in case anyone else gets any mad ideas to cross me.â
Something sharp stabbed into her arm, and Camillaâs sight began to go blurry and dark until she was no longer aware of the pain.
âYouâll beg for death soon enough.â
Everything burned. Alcohol washed over her open wounds, white hot and unbearable. It was difficult to see with only one eye. Everything was blurry, and dark. In her head, she screamed for help. There was a quick pinch at the back of her neck, like a bug bite, and her face went numb and tingling. Â
It was a relief only for a moment. It allowed her to think, to remember where she was and why her heart thudded painfully in her chest. Her body wanted to die, but Warren wouldnât let that happen. Not yet. She could see him hovering above her like a blurry shadow. Her glasses were crushed pieces of glass crunching under his foot as he shuffled around, picking up one tool, putting down another.
She could only see his smile when he brought his face nice and close to hers, playing the edge of a tool across her numb cheek. He moved away, and picked up her left hand. The toolâs cool, rounded body slid to her fingertips and she knew what it was just a moment before the pain hit.
Clamped around each finger in turn, she felt the ripping out of each nail. When one hand was done, she balled it up into a fist, trying hard to squeeze away the pain. Blood coated her hand like paint. She bit her tongue so hard it bled; when he got to the next hand, her body shivered. She called out for Denthos, her voice meek, tremoring. Â
Warren paused, and pulled her arm out. Something squeezed around her forearm, a tourniquet. Cold, and a pinch, and more tingling numbness made her arm and hand limp like a dead weight. He murmured so low she almost missed it. âDenthos canât hear you here.â
He repeated the process on her other hand, numbed it, moved on to her toes. Blood pooled under her heels. Her toes and fingers twitched. Her eye rolled in its socket, searching for a way out. All the while, she called out in her mind to Denthos, begging him to come. Begging him to help her.
The ceiling came to focus above her, and she recognized it at long last. Kiduâs home. Warren had taken her to the Qualian plane just to torture her. A chop and soft thud of something hitting the floor, crunching underneath his foot as he shifted to one side of her body, made her stomach heave. He rolled her to one side, allowing her to empty her stomachâs contents onto the floor. Fingers lay below like dead branches cut from a tree.
She wanted to leave. She wanted her body to give up. She felt vibrations come from her throat. She was laughing. Denthos couldnât save her. Denthos couldnât enter Kiduâs home.
Denthos couldnât save her.
She wanted to black out. She wanted to leave.
âDenthos,â She whispered, âIâm sorry.â Â Â
















