Summer Breeze makes me feel fine

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New and Improved Reference sheet for my OC Summer Winds. This time using the Picture given to me by @askbubblepop

For some reason i cant get the link to the profile, so i had to @ you Bubblepop, hope you dont mind!

Too any that see this, feel free to use the OC for what ever you want, just remember to @ me so i can see it!

The story of Maggie and Cash. A little bit of age difference, a little bit of grief, and a whole lotta horses. Maggie is a ranch owner and widow (heterosexual sort). Cash is hired as a ranch and for the Summer (her father, Buck, and Maggie know each other). Cash, I guess, is sorta taking a break from the city and girlfriends (although I didn't really get that feeling while reading the novel, that was more of a blurb on the back of the book sorta revelation). I guess that they fall for each other as they work the ranch and do the collecting of hay and such. There's some back and forth because all Maggie has ever known is heterosexualness, and Cash is a young sorta player. So neither one is totally all in. But, of course, they find themselves falling closer. My main problem with the novel was that I just didn't believe it. Maybe it's just me, but I felt like there was too much tell and not enough show. I couldn't feel the chemistry between the two women. They had some verbal sparring, and they both seemed written twenty years younger than they were (I would have guessed Cash was eight not twenty-eight, and Maggie maybe twenty not forty-three, and it was like that through the whole book, Maggie 'bouncing' from her truck? No, just no). I liked the plot, but, the characters all fell mostly flat for me and that made the novel less enjoyable.

BIG, HUGE, Thanks @askbubblepop For Featuring my OC in her last blog, and also giving me the Picture!