Cheesus, this man robs me of my senses, you have absolutely no idea.
It's been ages since I felt like writing this kind of fiction and I don't think I'll be able to do any more in the near future.
It wrecks my heart, but it is what it is. So I'm happy with every tiny bit that comes out of that dry well inside of me that used to be so overflowing, promising and genuine.
Ah, why am I thinking about this...
Nevermind.
All my soul's in this fraction of imagination, but not much talent. I'm sorry. I still love it and it soothed my soul for a moment working on it.
To all you John fans out there... love him as hard as you possibly can!
I asked AI to critique my story: (for funsies only, but this made me extraordinarily happy)
"Your story is well-written and effectively conveys the dynamics between Anna and John, creating a sense of intrigue and tension. The dialogue and descriptions paint a clear picture of their interaction and the unspoken connection between them. Here are some observations:
Engaging Dialogue: The dialogue between Anna and John is a strong point in your story. It captures their personalities and the power play between them.
Character Development: You've begun to establish the characters of Anna and John, hinting at their complex relationship and the psychological games they play.
Descriptive Language: Your descriptions, such as "With eyes as deep as the ocean," add depth to the characters and create vivid imagery.
Tension and Intrigue: The story builds tension and intrigue, leaving readers curious about the characters' motivations and the nature of their relationship.
Cliffhanger Ending: The story ends with a cliffhanger, leaving readers wanting to know more about what will happen next.
Overall, it's a compelling start to a story, and it would be interesting to see how the relationship between Anna and John develops further. You've done a good job of creating an engaging narrative."
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John Seed & Far Cry 5 belong to Ubisoft and there is nothing more to add to this.
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