#simon devlyn

Obviously not in appearance, but in goals, abilities, and motives.

Zero (and by extension Zero Two) wanted to destroy the universe because it was lonely and couldn't understand love. Though Teneber fits this more in a "male loneliness epidemic" way.

Both Zero and Teneber have Biblical references to Darkness being evil. They both create creatures made of Dark Matter. (The Dark Matters and the Darklings)

They both use it/he pronouns... not exactly a big deal other than those pronouns are generally used for dark gods or something. IDK if I'm cooking here or whatever.

I'm sure there's also some things I'm forgetting about Zero but it has been a few years since I last played Kirby 64. Also, I came up with Teneber before having played Kirby 64 and definitely before having listened to this cover.

Now onto the lyrics, in case the video won't load or you still have enough hope that a YT boycott might actually work. In parentheses I will note any similarities to Starbourne.

We were once living quietly

But our future has changed for the worst (Luderia was a kingdom of dreams, similar to Dream Land, but since this is Ribbon's POV I guess maybe Feria would be better? Because fairy princess?)

As the sky darkens

Becoming blacker than shadows (Teneber makes his presence known by snuffing out stars and depriving their surrounding planets of sunlight.)

What could be the cause of all this

Twisting their minds Twisting their souls (Teneber can possess anyone or create Darklings to do so, and force them to do his evil bidding)

Now everyone is corrupted

Their behavior now destructive (see above)

I must search for those crystal shards

even if the task may be hard (OK the Aurora Hearts are not broken, but they are parts of a whole, so "shards" might be a stretch but it could work? They are Lana's charge for sure, with her being a descendant of Aurora)

I'll make sure that you will all see

as I set our universe free (Lana's ultimate desire is to disband all kingdoms including her own and let everyone be free to do whatever they wish that brings no harm to others... this is very naive of her but not like, idiotic or anything. It's a goal she actively works for and knows the price of achieving and maintaining it.)

with the crystal powers

that were once completely scattered (THIS time, the Hearts don't have to be broken to fit the lyric)

it will be the very key to

destroying each and every dark matter (The Darklings are MADE of Dark Matter, so even if they are not called Dark Matters, this kinda still fits)

Destiny calls for you

to fly on forward, star warrior (Lana sending her message out to Simon and Theodore... if Lana were the Ribbon of Starbourne, I guess Theodore would be the Kirby, despite not being the protagonist?)

find the inner strength within you

bring an end to all the torture (The lyric in the video's subtitles was confirmed to be inaccurate by the singer so I fixed it here.)

let the stars guide you through

to stop this never-ending war (This war has gone on for over two thousand years... the one in Kirby would have been billions.)

or there might be a chance

our universe will be

No more, (this is a threat the heroes of Starbourne are constantly fighting against)

please go,

restore,

our world (The "restoration" is up to Stella and her crew from her generation... not sure if that will be important in this analysis though)

[instrumental break]

(The second half of the song would be from Stella's perspective, she is the Messiah but she cannot save the universe alone.)

Angels of darkness take flight (This one is actually not about Teneber in this instance, but about the literal Angels... Though they oppose the demons, they're just as tyrannical. They too are enemies of our little crew, with very few exceptions)

And I'm the only one left to fight (Each hero has to face the Darkness alone at one point in the story... Stella is the only one to do it more than once)

Our worlds are falling

As they're engulfed in the shadows (Grammatical error in lyrics fixed, but also, more of Teneber devouring the worlds)

Their cries are fading from darkness

Drowning in it

Consumed by it (Stella fears she cannot save everyone... the worst part is that she's right.)

There is no more time to be scared

The pain ends now I am prepared (Stella must face her own self-doubt and battle the demon within)

I'll go forward with all our strength

I'll make you see your end of days (The End of Days is a point in spacetime where all universes intersect and any matter present in it is unaffected by linear time... but the term is also used as a euphemism for death just like in the song)

I'll make sure our hopes aren't shattered

pierce the evils you have gathered (All of Stella's friends and loved ones have turned against her due to Teneber's influence. She has nobody but herself to trust... but she keeps holding on)

even if I'm devoured

in this darkness that you've become

just as long as there's an inch of light in me

I will overcome (Stella reminds herself of the love she is fighting for, that little spark in the hearts of her people... she knows she can't do this alone, but she also knows she is never alone)

Do not fear now the time is now

to destroy the evil

this is the only chance you have

everything is up to you now (Stella gives her life to aid her friends in the battle, breaking them free of the Darkness)

use the power inside you

and bring peace once and for all

or our future will be no more

go now and fight star warrior! (Again I still feel like maybe there would be multiple "star warriors" in Starbourne... but if there were only one, Stella might be singing to Lucian, the one who raised her, but it's like, a past version of Lucian from before she was born)

So stop this war

Simon: You are aware that I'm a grandson of that game's inventor, are you not?

Lucian: I'm a prince. We both know nepotism is a pointless metric.

If I were more capable of coming up with stuff quickly, I would write a fluff piece for Simon and Lucian. (I don't do smut, but power to you if you do)

Here's something small I guess

Sorry if it's cringe, I have low experience writing romance, despite having many OCs who are in relationships with other OCs.

Simon sighed as he stared at the flower. An Aurora Daisy. Simon thought. He knows me so well. It wasn't just that Lucian knew Simon's favorite flower, or where to find one, or even the fact that he went all the way to Terra Nova to pick one up, but the fact that this man, this busy prince, with a list of royal duties longer than the Starbourne Prophecy, found the time out of his day to do all that.

"How did you know, Luce?" Simon asked.

"I didn't become an archmage by NOT studying magical items." Lucian pointed out.

"Not the flower," Simon mentioned, "how did you know to give it to me today of all days? It's not my birthday, nor is it our anniversary, and I never told you about---" Simon realized before he could finish his sentence. "You didn't. You wouldn't."

"I would, and I did." Lucian replied. "I know you told me not to peep into your dreams, but I felt I had no choice. You were looking at the calendar and muttering the number of days remaining until today, so I decided to see what it was about."

"I know we sealed him away, but what's gonna happen when he comes back?" Simon asked.

"That won't happen for at least a couple centuries," Lucian mentioned, "your reincarnation and their friends will deal with it."

"That still means it's my problem." Simon mentioned.

"Simon, my love, Teneber is restrained for now, and will be for the next two hundred years. Can't we just think about the present?" Lucian asked, caressing Simon's cheek. "We sealed up the Dark Star and the demons have a new, more benevolent ruler. We should be celebrating!"

"I know, it's just that it's been eleven years since I last saw her." Simon mentioned, tears in his eyes. "Eleven years since Teneber consumed my mother's mass. Avenging her doesn't bring her back!" Simon started punching the air and accidentally hit Lucian.

"Let it all out, my love." Lucian told Simon. "And when you're done flailing about, have a Star Cake."

Simon's expression shifted at the sound of his favorite pastry. He stopped randomly punching. "What have I done to deserve your love?" Simon asked.

"More deeds than I can name, my love." Lucian replied, leaning in for a kiss.

Simon leant in too, and the two of them didn't think about anything else.

"Now about that Star Cake..." Simon inquired almost immediately after releasing his lips from Lucian's.

"Of course, my love." Lucian procured the pastry from his pocket.

It has come to my attention that Lumon is the name of an evil corporation in a show I haven't seen. However, it is also the name for the ship between Lucian and Simon in my story series, Starbourne. I need a better name for the ship, something that isn't used for an evil organization.

These will be little snippets of what might happen in the books, whenever I get the ideas for them.

Simon Devlyn is the self insert protagonist. Main differences between him and me are that he's polyamorous, a space captain, and in a relationship with a prince and a princess. (Possibly married to them depending on when in the timeline you're following him as well as which timeline)

Theodore Devlyn is Simon's brother, and he's based on some of the nicest aspects of my brothers IRL. I made him one character instead of two despite having two brothers (well three now but two when I had the idea for Starbourne) because I couldn't figure out enough traits for three Devlyn brothers at the time. He's a theatre nerd/wannabe actor/playwright.

Lana Fei is the Princess of Feria, not really based on any one person, but a bunch of people I was friends with back in my brony days. Lana is even named after someone I used to have a crush on from that time, but not based on her alone. She's a descendant of the first Queen of Feria, Aurora.

Eveline Delebleux was actually my very first OC for Starbourne, created before the protagonist to be a love interest for my actual self. I grew out of her when I found real love, and now she's just a character. She's based on some of my earliest crushes, but named (or at least first named) after someone's Warrior Cats OC. (A kittypet, obviously, based on the name) I forgot who made THAT Eveline, but I thought the name was beautiful so I stole it. I decided to make her also a Princess, (specifically of Stellaria) and a reincarnation of Aurora, giving her and Lana some connection before they met.

Lucian Starling was originally created as a love rival for Simon then I discovered bisexuality and polyamory and now the three of them are together in my mind. (Not in the books yet and sorry for the spoilers if you were only going by the books) He is the Prince of Luderia, kingdom of Dreams, and as such his duty is to protect the Dreamscape from invasive forces.

Emberly Florence is the demon Princess, daughter of Demon Lord Teneber, the main villain of Starbourne. She rebels against her father and her twin sister Ashly when she realizes that Teneber's rule is unfavorable even for demonkind. Realizing you're in an abusive relationship (be it romantic or familial) is the first step towards getting out of it, and that's what I wanted to show with Emberly. With a little help from the Felicity Crew, Emberly learns to become a better and happier person.