#serialsixtiesrp

URL: First of all, I’m so sorry this review is so late. Life has been hectic! Okay, onto the review. I think your URL is great! Short, easy to remember (especially due to the alliteration), relevant and no dashes. 

Icon: This icon is great too! Very striking and aesthetically pleasing, whilst being easy to see even when the icon is small. I’d personally like the SS initials on it somewhere, just to tie that together. I normally am not a fan of potentially triggering things in icons, but since you are a horror rp and will probably be tagging your posts with that, it can be avoided by people who don’t want to see it. 

Theme: This theme is really lovely. It’s neat and clean, but still interesting to look at. The colour scheme of red and black with a touch of white is a bit overdone, but it works well. 

Navigation: Your main page navigation includes everything I expect to see. One tiny thing is that I don’t think the application link needs “app/apply”, just apply would work. The actual navigation page again includes everything, and even more. The career suggestions page is a great idea.

Sidebar plot: I like your sidebar plot. I think it provides a good amount of information and reads well. Something I noticed though is that the first sentence is a bit of a run-on sentence. It could easily be tweaked to: “Lily Valley, in 1963, was a quiet town; there were bad areas but all towns had them.” or “ Lily Valley, in 1963, was a quiet town - there were bad areas but all towns had them” or even having it as two separate sentences. It would flow much better. One thing I really like is that you’re being specific. The specific year and the name of the girl instead of just saying “a girl” makes it feel much more thought-out and realistic.

Main plot: This main plot works well. Whilst I think a few sentences are a tiny bit clunky, which usually happens, overall the plot is well-written. You’ve included even more specific details, which I love. I’m personally not a fan of rhetorical questions as the last sentence, I do see how it fits with this genre, so I think it works. The police reports are a great touch as well.

Graphics: Your graphics are very simple and I am a big fan of that. I actually don’t have any critiques of these. In particular, I love your promo graphic. It really looks like it could be a movie poster. Very simple but eye-catching and summarises the genre and time period well.

Rules: Your rules are well-written, well-laid out and include everything I expect to see, so good work there.

Application: I think that everything is covered in this app and I like the inclusion of the motives section - that’s a good touch. It’d be nice to have a trigger section in the ooc section, so that people can tag any specific triggers. They could be posted to a trigger page and kept anonymous. Other than that, I have no critiques here.

Biographies: Since this is an OC rp, there’s not much to say here.

Diversity: Again, this is an OC rp so I can’t say much. I do love the list of wanted fcs you have though. It’s very diverse and I hope your rp turns out that diverse.

Admins: You seem very helpful and very passionate about this rp and your answers are informative and detailed. I also don’t see any spam posts, which is great!

I love your icon and your URL. The alliteration seems to make it catchier which I think is really cool. I personally love anything based around the 20th century and seeing a roleplay based in that time period is such an exciting thing to see. Your theme is very dark and beautiful, I love the graphics and the whole setting is very neat and classy but with a scary edge to it. This theme is one of my favourites as well. I’m honestly so thrilled that you chose to steer clear from a container theme. 

I loved reading through your plot, I think it’s very capturing and a really proper, well thought out story. Your rules are understandable as well. Everything seems to be perfectly in order in my eyes and you’ve done a really good job with organising everything as admins. 

Overall, I am honestly very impressed by this. I love this whole concept and setting and I know people who like this sort of roleplay will most certainly enjoy being here. Make sure to keep promoting and taking care of your players and you’ll be all set! If you have further questions, let me know.