#script vs show

In the script of the interrogation scene, Valjean speaks - the stony silence we see in this scene during the broadcast episode is a far more effective choice than this rather awkward repeated “No answer,” of course.

The script also names one of the Toulon OCs here: Gambon the guard.

Thénardier backstory for the inn in Montfermeil we did not get to see in the show.

Gillenormand/Nicolette in the shooting script, which did not make its way onto the screen - a scene that seems to take the place of Gillenormand’s glee at being accused of having fathered his former servant Magnon’s children.

Javert was suposed to ride a horse both in his first scene with the cardinal as well as in his later scene guarding the quarry.

The way the final cut sees him progress from standing on his feet and walking in the dusty heat of Toulon to riding his horse through the streets of Montreuil seems indeed a better visual representation of his rise.

Furthermore, in the episode we saw this attack of a prisoner on a guard leading to the execution scene didn’t happen in the quarry but while the prisoners moved through Toulon.

Fantine’s conversation with Favorite is longer than what we see on the screen - the shooting script puts a lot more emphasis on her thinking that she’s special, which the final cut lacks.

Felix talking with his friends about their coming abandonment of their girlfriends only exists in the script and is missing from the episode.

Also missing is this following scene of Fantine at her former job, still secure in her current happiness, not realizing that she’s only days away from losing all security.

This scene showing us Valjean trying to spend the night in an inn after being released from Toulon also did not make it into the final cut.

Also originally in the script and not in the final cut, the Brick scene in which Valjean tries to sleep in the dog’s hut.

Additional Bishop feelings in this scene, the end of which did not make it onto TV.

After being released by the Bishop and leaving with his candlesticks, Valjean has a flashback to his childhood and his mother which isn’t in the final cut.

This long, delightful scene from the Brick is unfortunately missing in the episode we saw - I assume it was cut for length which is a shame, because I enjoy the way it both fleshes out Fantine’s Montreuil grisette friends and gives us the Brick scene about Madeleine’s “grotto” and the town’s gossip about it, which never makes it into adaptations.

Also missing from the episode: this heartbreaking scene showing that the Thénardiers keep Cosette in the kennel with the dog, perhaps in a nod to this bit from the Brick: “Éponine and Azelma did not look at Cosette. She was the same as a dog to them.”

We see this scene play out pretty much the same on screen, but the script confirms what the actors have told us in interviews: both recognize each other from the start in this scene.

Plus we get this additional explanation from Javert about what sort of town Montreuil is, presumably cut for length or because it interferes with the tension of this game of double meanings they both know Javert is playing.

My favourite find in this episode: An entire cut scene in which Javert converses with Police OC Basquiat, who at first glance seems to fulfill the function of giving us more exposition about the good Madeleine has done for the town, but at second glance seems to ship Javert with Madeleine.

Also cut was this scene with Sister Simplice that foreshadows what is to come.

Madame Victurnien’s visit to Montreuil has a bit more dialogue here, plus details about the wine she’s served.

This scene also has some additional dialogue in the script for Javert that we don’t get to see, although the scene has tension enough without Javert having to spell it out like that.

Another scene missing is this little interlude at Laffitte, where, curiously, Valjean only withdraws 70 000 instead of 630 000 francs.

Just as curious is that while the script had Javert on a horse in Toulon, we see him walk in Montreuil and in Paris here - compared to the broadcast episodes where Javert walks in Toulon, but is set above others on the scene as he rides his horse both in Montreuil and on this ride to Paris, where he gallops up to the Prefecture in a rather spectacular fashion.

More historically accurate, of course, Javert would have taken a coach to Paris, but I for one enjoy the visual of Javert racing up to the Prefecture too much to want to argue with this decision.

In the show, this scene takes place at night, and Valjean and Javert encounter each other on horseback - no cronies, only horses.

There is some additional interaction here - a named OC called Marguerite who doesn’t have any lines in the broadcast version of the Bamatabois scene.

This part of Javert’s speech was partly cut, perhaps because method actor David “Javert” Oyelowo realized that talking about Valjean’s wise and kind features is a bit too much even when he’s playing with him.

There is some additional information here that the episode as broadcast doesn’t give us, namely the fact that Javert (or so he claims) has already been visiting Champmathieu in Arras.

This part of the script is of especial interest to me because the show’s most visceral part of Valjean’s dark night of the soul - when Valjean takes the burning coin out of the fire with his bare hand and intentionally burns his palm with it - seems to be entirely unscripted. Perhaps a very late addition or improvisation - although the latter seems unlikely, given that there surely have to be some sort of special effects or a stuntman involved.

In the script, Champmathieu’s speech is longer and gives us more Brick details about his background and his daughter.

Instead of Javert’s very memorable “CUFFS!” moment on screen, the script is a bit more laid-back here.

In the show, we see Valjean retrieve a file he’d hidden in his mouth in this scene to show us that he’s planning to escape, and to lead us towards his next scene where we see him free in the forest. In the script, there is no file. Instead he gets to have an emotional moment with the little bird Fantine made - which also leads us to Cosette and the promise he made, but perhaps, without the Orion, makes his transition from prisoner to escaped convict too confusing.

Valjean’s first conversation with Cosette is somewhat longer in the script here, where he asks her about the Thénardiers and their treatment of her.

This short conversation between the Thénardiers discussing Valjean is cut entirely.

Also in the script but not in the episode we saw are a few further Brick details, like Madame Thénardier deciding to throw Cosette out and Jean Valjean playing Santa by leaving a coin of gold in her shoe (and, unlike in the Brick, in Gavroche’s as well).

Furthermore Valjean and Cosette’s conversation after they leave the inn is longer in the script; Valjean explanation about Fantine’s death and Cosette asking if he is her father aren’t in the broadcast version.

This scene plays out on screen as it does in the script for the most part, except that we’re missing the running gag of Javert staying at the Wild Duck, just like Madame Victurnien did (and everyone else who’s warned by their coachman about the Thénardiers).

The broadcast episode misses this entire scene with the Thénardiers that prepares us for their coming bankruptcy.

Also missing from the actual episode is this scene with its nod to Javert disguised as the Gorbeau beggar.

This scene has some additional dialogue in the script that seems to place more of an emphasis on Javert’s part in it.

Also missing from the show is this scene of Valjean and Cosette running from the police after they escape the Gorbeau tenement.

The only part of this scene that made it into the show is Cosette complaining about her hurting feet, which unfortunately means that we are denied a Valjean who’s seeing visions of Javert’s smiling face.

Unfortunately also absent from the episode is this moment of Javert savouring his game just as he does in the Brick.

This scene mostly plays out as it does on screen, although both Valjean’s and Simplice’s dialogue is longer, but I am mostly just awwing over the description of Valjean looking like a dumb animal pleading for its life. The best convent Valjean.

These scenes are also missing from the episode as we saw it, which instead leads us right from Marius’ conversation with Mabeuf to the scene where Marius bursts in on Gillenormand and confronts him about it.

Another cut scene that gives us more Courfeyrac, who gets Bossuet’s backstory with Marius while at the same time managing not get expelled from his studies for it.

This encounter with Patron-Minette is missing from the episode as well, as is Marius’ conversation with Courfeyrac which fleshes him out a little more

While this scene did make it into the episode, much of the early parts of this conversation here didn’t. While Valjean does tell Cosette reluctantly about her mother, the episode misses much of the details he gives here.

Missing from the episode is also this encounter with Patron-Minette on Valjean and Cosette’s first outing to the Luxembourg.

This scene ends much earlier in the episode we saw, ending with Valjean declaring it too chilly. It’s missing Valjean’s paranoia and anger at Marius following them - on TV, Marius loses sight of them while they leave the park and never follows them through the streets.

Also missing is this scene between Marius and Eponine following Marius’ return from the Luxembourg.

Marius’s dream starts somewhat differently - in the show, Cosette enters his bedroom.

This scene plays out on screen much as it does in the script, but there is a lovely bit of Valjean characterization in the script, and we unfortunately don’t get to hear the convicts sing.

About half of the dialogue is missing in the version we saw, including Eponine showing that she can read and her speech about sleeping under the bridges and what it feels  like to starve.

Also most of the dialogue from the end of this scene is missing.

This very short scene where Cosette remembers the Gorbeau house on their visit to the Thénardiers is missing as well.

The visit to the Gorbeau house plays out as it is in the script, but I’m enjoying this scene description too much not to quote it. :D

While this scene mostly plays out on screen as it does in the script, we are unfortunately missing out on this utterly delightful ending where Javert disdainfully refuses to shake Marius’ hand.

Also cut is this short moment of Marius cocking his pistols and nearly giving himself away.