#really dramatic

These shadows haunt me,

They know my secrets

know the past I wish to flee

my despair and my regrets.

My boat holds on,

Spring flowers with wind are gone,

In a raging storm,

Summer no longer keeps me warm.

Days pass in neglect

I wonder if my dreams

I swore so hard to protect

Are really what it seems.

under the darkened Moon,

These shadows haunt me,

but they sing a comforting tune

Hiiiii anon! :’) 

It’s a short fic, and it’s not all that drama, but I manage to be overdramatic. 

http://archiveofourown.org/works/575467/chapters/1031711 :”)))))) really good! If you intend to read it, let me know what you think later! Or come at me to scream if you’re as dramatic as I am, ah ha. 

I’m angry about Rumple making the author write Belle with him, and all the “I just wanted to feel that once more, we were in love” bullshit because even though Belle still loves you YOU-DON’T-HAVE-THE-RIGHT. Sure, nothing wrong with making her forget all the shit you did and NOT TAKING ANY RESPONSABILITY. ugh. 

And HE ALSO WRITES HIMSELF AS A GOOD FATHER FOR BAE. And that would be sweet if it was because he WANTS his child to have a happy life (until he has to die because he can’t stop that), but no, it’s so it’s easier for Rumplel to move on, so it doesn’t hurt him so much, Rumple says so himself.

Annd the writers wasted another opportunity to kill Rumple and let the character go away with some dignity. Yayy

Also, I’m guessing Rumple didn’t plan anything of the book besides the hero, the Belle and the Bae thing, because the alternate Hook was sad. Like, I expected more from Rumple than turning Hook into a coward sailor. Plus if (nearly) all the alternate stories were created by the author that explains the Snowing hate and the twisted story they had there.

(Which I LOVED. Like, I ship alternate Snowing HARD. Is that weird? Eh,I don’t care)

Last and more important question. Where is Will? There was no one in Storybrook, so I’m guessing he was with the Merry Men?Idk I wish he had showed up in the episode. Which brings another question, why weren’t the Merry Men affected? They were thiefs like in the original story. Robin was still a good person...(? Sure he was with Zelena and so neither Regina nor him had their happy ending, but it’s that all? And the Merry Man are just the same ‘cause their leader isn’t actually happy though he doesn’t know it yet so that’s enough? Or maybe they’re not heroes, they’re more like antiheroes so the author just leaves them be? Author, man, there’s a lot of inconsistencies there, I don’t know how you got published.

(AND WHERE WAS ROLAND? Idk if the time of the story coincides or not with the one in reality, but if it did, Roland was babysitted while his father got married lol. If it was in a time before the reality, then Marian didn’t happen cause that would crush Zelena’s happy ending, so Roland didn’t happen either.(? Was he like in a void? I want to read about it. 

I swear, the poor kid only shows up to be cute and the rest of the time he’s being babysitted by one of the Merry Men. I don’t know how you all put with that, fellas.You should make him an intervention, tell him that just because you’re friends doesn’t mean he can drop off his kid on you anytime he wants.)