Why I think the “industrial complex arc” is the best arc in ORV aka my stupidly long unfinished love letter PART 1
This post will cover extensive details of the plot from chapter 193 - Story Horizon V till chapter 281 - Demon King of Salvation III It will also have some mention of things from Before these chapters and After but not as much and they will be chapter marked. This range is also not super rigid, you can classify the arc as starting much later or earlier etc with multiple mini arcs wrapped up in it but to me it ultimately starts once dokja is in the demon realm and ends when the complex is transported from the demon realm by secretive plotter.
Starting off, storytelling requires good and clear foundations that the reader can rationalize so that they get entrenched in the world view being told. As a shallow example, in a murder mystery you follow the detective with an understanding that for there to be a mystery there tends to be an acknowledgement that murder is “bad” or at least there is a need for it to be “resolved”, a reasoning we can relate to. For a good story to tie us in, we as readers should be able to understand and respect this rationalizing for any hopes of going with it. However to take it a step further and build an engaging story, the writer who has spent a lot of time selling you this world premise needs to take a hammer to that foundation and rebuild it over and over again, the stronger the foundation the more intriguing when it breaks, If this mystery truly needs to be resolved, what are the consequences of pursuing it? Should the stones really be upturned as we have been convinced up to this point? Are these the answers you are searching for? What are the cracks in the characters logic, and subsequently yours the readers?
In a lot of good stories this tends to be a gradual build up only to come to a head, usually at the climax and or midpoint but not always, wherein the main character(s) have to contend with the flaws in their world view and grow from it.
As a more pointed example in the popular story of “One piece” we can clearly see that the foundations of the story break around the climax in “marineford arc” (Light spoilers) the story has spent a lot of time selling us on whimsy and the power of belief especially in the main characters conviction, of course luffy will become the pirate king! And while he has had setbacks he is the main character and the world view in this story is that he will always win. That is until he doesnt and we are forced to contend with why, and how that flaw has been present throughout the entire story gradually rising with the stakes, the first proper death happens and we have to adjust our worldview as readers as we realize what the stakes really are and that it's not as whimsical as we thought.(spoiler end) With this in mind, the “industrial revolution arc” is the moment in the story, coming right on the heels of the climax of the “prophecy arc”, where we start to see the cracks in the foundations laid down beforehand start to bear fruit.
I might sound dramatic when I call it the best arc, because in all honesty the things I will talk about are present throughout all of ORV and this arc cant stand by itself without everything laid before it and after it, these cracks extend all over the story and we face them over and over again, but what makes it really really good to me is that the industrial arc turns them from cracks in our world view into gushing veins that beat with the messages outlined and communicated clearly, this arc is the heartbeat throughout the entire story summarizing, explaining, and cradling our misconceptions, it's the unfurling of the core messages of ORV and its told in the most beautiful symphonic way possible.
For every foundation that ORV lays down in the story beforehand the industrial revolution arc answers back with vigor.
Foundation 1 : you can never truly know someone/yourself
Answer: so what? write on the wall anyways
(Chapter 180) The first time dokja ever communicates with the fourth wall is in the “prophecy arc” right after defeating the devourer of dreams, begging it to give him his mother back after he finally gets to hear her story written by her on the wall, the fourth wall for the first time, contradicts him in its narration
I didn't cry. 「 Kim Dokja was crying. 」
and seemingly turns against him, and that's when dokja realizes the wall is sentient. We learn in this moment to fear this wall that he reveres and loves because we recognize it's what's stopping him from connecting with his mother. “Writing on the wall” as a concept isn't introduced with dokja doing it first, but with his mother, his mother was the reason he needed the wall. She told his story, changed it and distorted it, but doing so has made his life a living hell. She wrote him out of his story and built a wall around him like an overprotective mother, she didn't give the courts the chance to prosecute dokja or even look at his story. Originally, this wall was her wall, the prison barrier between her and him and it was composed of the “story of an underground killer”.
He turns it off and we recognize just how much dokja relies on this wall, he can't face himself or try to understand his feelings or find out his attributes because to do so would put him at risk of the world that wants to harm him.
But then he turns it on and starts properly “communicating with the wall”
「 Thus, Kim Dokja can't understand it himself. Why is he trying to save his mother? 」 "I can't explain."
And because it gives him his mother back, protects him from the devourer of dreams and he gets closer to it he feels comfortable with it again. (chapter 186) In the events of the 73rd demon king selection scenario we also gain a deeper understanding of this wall and dokja’s relationship to it and his relationship to himself when yoo joonghyuk attempts to sacrifice himself for him.
He was certain that I knew all about him. However, Yoo Joonghyuk was wrong. I didn't know Yoo Joonghyuk. The Yoo Joonghyuk I knew would never do this.
And
Perhaps Yoo Joonghyuk didn't understand my words. There was a huge wall between us that couldn't be filled. However, it was due to this wall that I could see this guy again and again. Yoo Joonghyuk's remorse, his despair and his dreams. An indomitable will that didn't give up.
To dokja, the wall is made up of mostly ways of survival and subsequently personified to him as yoo joonghyuk. To dokja this wall could never be something negative even when it's stopping him from connecting with both his mother and yoo joonghyuk, it's his love, his protection and safety. Sure he has opinions on what could be better but the original stays the original in his heart, he would never dare to deface his wall/bible. The changes to yoo joonghyuk in this scene, the self sacrificial actions he is committing so he doesn't lose dokja, are jarring to him because he feels like he defaced his bible by inserting himself in it against his mothers teachings, and because kim dokja doesn't really understand who he is and doesn't think of himself as worthy, this scares him completely and he finds it hard to wrap his head around. (chapter 444) as an aside, this is also why when this sacrificial nature peeks out in 3rd round yoo joonghyuk he can't wrap his head around it as opposed to him accepting it readily when it comes to 999th yoo joonghyuk, who he has modeled this behavior off of because to him 999th yoo joonghyuk got there by himself and 3rd round got there because of him even though obviously they both are just completing each other. (end chapter 444)
The story with all of this makes a point of distinguishing between “writing on the wall” and “communicating with the wall” dokja cannot fathom writing on the wall yet mainly because he can't bare to insert himself on it but also because he doesn't know what “himself” is, but he finds talking to it less daunting and from there it's a stepping stone to being able to write on it.
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The beginning of industrial complex arc starts with all the characters finally out of the Seoul Dome, an ejection from the story as we know it and world we've come so entrenched in, we've never seen the characters in this setting we don't know who they are in moments of rest and we almost never get to hear their thoughts outside of what Dokja thinks of them.
In chapter 193 we get one of our first povs outside of dokja in the story without his oversight or knowledge, a jung heewon pov, a character who just like dokja has only ever existed outside of the story and can only exist in tandem with him, if dokja is not in the timeline she doesn't get the chance to exist. She is in korea outside of Seoul, surrounded by the familiarity of government structure and reality, she is bombarded with journalist who immediately distort her story alienating her from herself and from previous chapters we know to distrust how other people tell your story, orv has taught us that no good can come from selling yourself. The sight of journalists immediately puts the reader on alert, akin to seeing a dokkaebi, but jung heewon's first actions upon being faced with this scene is to show us a crack in the foundation, she frees herself from their narrative tells us more about herself that we weren't aware of and then most importantly
she tells dokja's story.
I'm not the hero you think I am. I wasn't a candidate for the national team and I didn't do well in kendo." Jung Heewon spoke into the microphone like she was talking to the whole world. "Before the destruction came, I was just a bartender working at a cheap bar." Her words caused a stir among the reporters. Nobody could believe it. Someone scoffed and someone else looked a bit jealous. In front of these gazes, Jung Heewon felt strangely free. She wasn't the old 'Jung Heewon' anymore. Jung Heewon realized it with all these eyes on her. The reporters kept asking her questions. How could a bartender become one of the last survivors? How could she survive and how did she become the Judge of Destruction? [The constellation 'Bald General of Justice' is looking at you with sad eyes.] [The constellation 'One-Eyed Maitreya' is reminded of someone by your words.] The indirect messages of the constellations came from all over the place. Jung Heewon opened her mouth without understanding her feelings. "Do you know Kim Dokja?"
and then the next scene is this
[Someone is talking about you.] …Talking about me? [Your story is being created on Planet Earth.] I could see what happened. Someone was talking about me on Earth. Who was it? It couldn't be Yoo Joonghyuk. Lee Hyunsung? Jung Heewon? Or Shin Yoosung? …I didn't know. Still, it was funny. Someone was telling my story. Someone still remembered… [The new story 'Kim Dojega's Legend' has been created on Peace Land.] …I hoped they would at least get my name right. I looked up at the night sky where the stars were invisible.
To have your story told, even clumsily/incorrectly, earnestly and with love is saving dokja, showing us the crack in the worldview that to sell your story is dangerous, the beginnings of an understanding for why constellations crave having their stories told even distortedly, and further sympathizing his mothers actions as an attempt for salvation. Though it doesn't excuse it.
what jung heewon and peace land are doing here is that they are writing on the wall, they cant reach dokja he is too far away and alienated physically and emotionally but their attempts are saving him.
on the other side of the wall in the demon realm far away from any semblance of reality fully entrenched in a fantasy world dokja has lost his physical human body he is more untethered than he has ever been in the story so far craving connection, craving stories so much that the fourth wall starts fully narrating for him because they are the only way he can survive
he reaches out to jang hayoung, a character that like jung heewon could only exist thanks to dokja, thanks to dokja leaving comments for the author. but those comments get distorted by the writer when making the character and whether you consider this “writing on the wall” or “talking to the wall” the end result is the same. jang hayoung isn't someone dokja is familiar with nor understands fully despite his deep understanding of ways of survival. Jang Hayoung is introduced as the second protagonist of ways of survival, and depending on how you look at it, dokja's OC. There are many parallels between them, for example in their first proper conversation jang hayoung asks dokja "what are you" dokja tells them to guess, and jang hayoung guesses “returnee”, to which dokja replies
I looked at his brightly shining eyes and somehow wanted to make fun of him. "Your reasoning is right but you need one premise" "whats the premise?" "The premise is that all returnees are strong." The beautiful young man's expression became strange at my words. "What do you mean by that? Don't you know what a returnee is? They are those who returned to their planets after gaining a powerful strength from another dimension or planet. How can those people be weak?" "I don't know. You haven't met all returnees in the world, right?" "That…" "For example, some returnees might not want to return because they hate their planet." The expression of the young boy hardened. "You are frustrated because you moved to a different dimension several times but didn't get much power." "…" "You got a new body but you don't have any talent." "…Wait." "You became frustrated by your lack of talent and decided to sit still in one place and live an ordinary life."|
My thoughts upon reading this is that the second way to survive in a ruined world, is to escape into a different world, become different people and learn to become stronger to cope with reality....just like reading a book. of course dokja doesn't actually ever outright say that he IS a returnee but he does admit multiple times that it could apply to him
"You are a returnee. Why bother interfering with the ecology of the Demon Realm?" "I'm not a returnee." In a sense, there was no word more accurate.
and also
If Yoo Joonghyuk suffered from the 'regression depression' then this person(jang hayoung) suffered from a thorough 'self-loathing'.
and so from here we see how similar him and jang hayoung are especially at the age he created them at and its why specifically dokja struggles to understand them a lot more than any other character in the series despite his deep fondness for them. Because jang hayoung is a part of him.
"In any case, quickly talk to it. You can communicate with that wall." Jang Hayoung's face turned red after hearing that he could talk to the wall. I wanted to tell him not to worry. After all, I was in the same boat in regards to talking to a wall
Dokja telling jang hayoung to talk to the wall is the stepping stone required to write on the wall of communication, but the wall of communication is just a chat box, and so here the two concepts finally meet “writing on the wall” and “talking to the wall” are one and the same for jang hayoung. To communicate is to create. When trying to instruct Jang Hayoung on what to write on that wall however, Dokja completely fails, showing us he really doesn't know how to communicate well with others and it's jang hayoung who manages to succeed in reaching out to people in part because jang hayoungs raison d'etre stemmed from a younger dokja’s need to connect with the author, the story, and himself. And upon meeting jang hayoung just like we have previously gained a more nuanced understanding for why constellations crave having their stories told, we also gain an equally nuanced understanding for why readers need to consume stories.
Because when we meet jang hayoung we simultaneously see more closely how the people in the demon realm have lost their stories and their narratives, they are just cogs in a machine that grinds stories down in a factory and the one story they do have is completely rigged against them that they don't even bother participating in it. and the one thing that gives them hope, the one thing that keeps them going is watching other people's stories through the screens. Inadvertently even though dokja's story in the 73rd demon king scenario is just another story born directly of exploitation by higher powers to be fed into the same machine that enslaves them for said higher powers amusement, it lays the grounds for hope and inspiration and sustenance for these people.
…It was a strange feeling. It wasn't their scenario but they sympathized with the stories I had experienced. Their faces looked like they received comfort.Maybe it wasn't just the constellations who needed stories. The stories were necessary for everyone.
But furthermore beyond just that because orv can't stop there! the biggest crack in this foundation is due to Jang hayoung’s true power at its core, how they blur the line between constellations and people by communicating with both equally highlighting how its specifically alienation under capitalism that creates a class structure of exploitation. when jang hayoung communicates with the abyssal flame dragon, a god who we know only as the embodiment of Evil and Power up to this point, who is in a position of exploitation over the incarnations and has participated in its systems, instead of an uncaring god we get an embodiment of all lost 15 year olds, we get to hear his worries and how much he cares for han sooyoung and this story and how he tries to help with all he can but he is limited with distance and ignorance. Jang hanyoung connects dokja with ABFD who in turn helps his friends dismantle that alienation and distance.
In (chapter 114) when we see Persephone eating the stories and how dokja avoids it we sympathize with dokja and Persephone comes of as cannibalistic and evil and we start to doubt our spot in the food chain, how we must be no better than persephone, but in this arc it sheds MULTIPLE nuances on that scene, to consume something for the sake of survival, with love with hunger, to communicate with it. A crack has formed in our understanding, in fact we get a recreation of this scene with the duke of the syswitchz complex in which she served him a similar spread and watched him gorge himself and she judged him for being simply a consumer recharacterizing even her presence in that initial scene. Up till this point we as readers see ourselves as consumers, the narrative has built us and dokja as just another cog in the machine feeding off of the dregs and causing harm and we agree because of how dokja frames it, that we are no better than constellations, but when we see how it helps others in the same situation survive and overcome their reality and how even constellations themselves like ABFD try their best to aid them in a miserable situation...is it truly as black and white as we have been led to believe? Can we forgive ourselves wherever we lie in the class structure? Can we reach out? What better way than for the constellation that is the embodiment of capitalism to tell us this in regards to even the most violent of constellations, the ones that could seemingly care less for the story who have hurt others and participate willingly into the system and are simply seeking to consume.
[Still, don't hate them so much.] It took some time for me to understand his words. [They just couldn't stand the loneliness. Whether it is a garbage or a noble constellation… they all acted like that because they like the story.]
Because you see when jung heewon and peaceland propagate dokja’s story and it being a GOOD thing is that it requires a world view that consuming a story isn't necessarily a bad thing, engaging with something is important - if we write on the wall, we also need people to read that wall. And subsequently you can never really truly know the people who are engaging with the story nor their reasons, unless you reach out, unless against all odds you communicate, no matter how unredeemable you think you are or you think they are, just that simple act is of an intense purity and power in a world built on capital and consumption.





















