#punctuation mistake

All the miners?" → "All the miners?"

Taking a breath, she sliced through the small section as close to her scalp as she could manage; the knife passing through without hesitation. → Taking a breath, she sliced through the small section as close to her scalp as she could manage, the knife passing through without hesitation.

its stone → it's stone

breakdown → break down

Ranelle emitted a laugh, bright and clear into the air. Caught off guard by his bold gesture. → Ranelle emitted a laugh, bright and clear into the air, caught off guard by his bold gesture.

Realizing the intentions of their leader and his girl were different, gave Abree immense pleasure. → Realizing the intentions of their leader and his girl were different gave Abree immense pleasure.

said Gideon trying to hurry → said Gideon, trying to hurry

said Charlie sounding brave. → said Charlie, sounding brave.