This is an unusual and unique to me piece of storytelling poetry. It's not meant to be metaphorical or an analogy for anything. There are no special or hidden connotations planted here or there. It's simply a unique creation designed to tell of a dream, a very vivid dream that I had one night. And it was such a powerful dream, that it stayed with me all day, till after work and I was able to jot notes enough down to work this one out. This was a little work for me. If anyone has constructive advise or just simply liked it, feel welcomed to let me know. Blessings
This is my first lengthy story poem. I am looking for constructive criticism on how to improve it's presentation, plot and readability, and












