So youâre writing about an Outer Borough.
Youâre a writer working in New York and youâre about to publish some riveting, hyper-local content. Maybe youâre reporting on where the halal guys buy their lamb, or showing how Canarsie will be the next Flatbush, or exploring the burgeoning momo scene in Jackson Heights. Youâre about to be drowning in pageviews. Dope! Great! But hang on.Â
We are not âout here.â And weâre CERTAINLY not âout THERE.âÂ
The City of New York was consolidated on January 1, 1898, including Queens, Kings, Richmond, New York, and Bronx counties. Whoever your audience-- young people, yogis, pet owners, whatever-- weâre scattered throughout all five boroughs of the city. It may seem subtle, but your readers notice when you write âall the way in Queensâ or âout in the Bronx,â and it grates on us. Avoid relative terms of distance or familiarity if the only point of reference is where you live.Â
Sure, there are places that are hard to get to by public transportation. And if youâre writing about transportation issues, keep at it! But talk to locals before you make value judgments. Some neighborhoods may be far from the subway, but many people in the city enjoy a lifestyle that doesnât rely on transit. Talk to local people to figure it out. Which brings me to my second point:Â
People care about where we live. Ask us.
This should be one of the first questions you ask when covering any location-based story in New York. Practice it: âWhat neighborhood is this?â If youâre speaking in person, it may seem silly to ask about where you are. But it matters. And itâs better to be safe than sorry. If you get a location wrong, your readers will roll their eyes and inform you, if not discount your reporting to some degree. Even residents sometimes disagree about neighborhood boundaries, so ask two people if youâd like, or call up the local Community Board. Theyâll be happy to tell you.Â
As a writer, you probably donât need to be told this, but words matter. Somehow even the New York Times style guide allows formulations like âthe Country Club section of the Bronx.â This is not how any New Yorker speaks. New York is a city of neighborhoods, not wards, districts, or emirates. (Attempt ânabeâ at your own risk.)
Avoid cliches.
This is just good writing, but it bears repeating when describing New York neighborhoods. Queens has never been peopled only by Archie Bunkers. Apocryphal stories about Staten Island being won from New Jersey explain nothing. Brooklyn was never merely the borough of homes and churches. Thereâs nothing wrong with appreciating the deep history of New York. But if youâre describing history that you havenât researched, in writing that isnât about history, itâs probably best avoided.Â
There are no âouter boroughs.âÂ
Itâs not the 17th Century anymore. All 5 boroughs are pretty densely inhabited by people who read, and comment, and will tweet at you if you get our city wrong. Thanks for being conscientious.Â