#originalending

okay since some of you asked… here it is. The raw, unfiltered, never-developed original ending idea for Whirlwind.

Disclaimer: this was never written or developed beyond this rough concept. Let’s just say my friend hit the emergency brakes on that mess real quick. So this is purely for the drama.

So in the first version of the story, after Jackson tells Jinyoung he loves him… Jinyoung snaps. He starts spiraling, haunted by memories of his father violating his mother while claiming he “loved her.” It messes him up deeply. He stops sleeping, drinks too much, barely eats. He begins to lose weight.

Jackson notices, but he’s helpless, every time he tries to talk to Jinyoung, he either gets “I’m fine,” or Jinyoung distracts him with sex.

Then comes the infamous dinner party (yes, the one that is in the final version). While drinking, Nell pokes at Jinyoung: “You look destroyed.” He laughs and says, “Maybe I am. Maybe I'm losing my mind.” That’s all Nell needs, she senses the crack and slithers right in.

She pushes and manipulates (as she does), and eventually convinces Jinyoung to do another shoot for her OnlyFans. But Jinyoung says he’ll only do it if Jackson joins, because in his warped mind, if Jackson’s there, it’s not cheating.

Nell agrees.

Of course, Jackson would never agree to that. So Jinyoung… drugs him.

Nell brings people over. They have their way with Jackson while Jinyoung just sits there and watches while drinking.

The next day, Jackson doesn’t remember anything; he was drunk, drugged, and completely unaware. Until Nell finds him at the clinic and shows him the video.

That’s when everything collapses.

Jackson goes feral. He destroys their apartment. Smashes the snow globe. Disappears.

The news is out there because everyone is looking for Jackson.

Jay B finds Jinyoung and literally smacks some sense into him.

Eventually, Jackson shows up at Bambam’s place after a few days. The final scene would’ve been Jackson sitting alone in the park, reading Jinyoung’s letter, crying, until Bambam finds him. Fade to black.

My friends told me:

This is NOT the ending these characters deserve.

It doesn’t match the spirit of the story or their arcs.

So yeah… we pivoted. The ending you got, the healing, the forgiveness, the bittersweet softness, that’s what they deserved.

Had to take a step back with Black as Pitch but the chapter plot and dialouge have been written... as well as some steamy bits... not all that needs to be there, but some.

Unfortunate Souls has been tallied, Bartleby the boss bitty won first chapter to be posted. Things that are emotional will take me longer to write as I'm an emotional sponge and apparently a masochist as I love the ideas but man do they hurt to write. Research has gone into this so be mindful of tags and warnings. I will update tags but in case I miss one there will be a heavy warning for each chapter and the specific trigger warnings. (I was really depressed when the characters and their personal stories were originally created, so I do apologize for the darkness of this story and I definitely know it's not for everyone.) I know a lot of people are saying all of them but this is an individual adoption, each bitty needs a lot of tlc and attention. Choose your own adventure, each chapter is dedicated to one specific bitty. Maybe when it's done I might consider and all out adoption spree... but until then please enjoy your souls chosen bitty and with enough love, therapy, and understanding, your new inseparable and very happy partner.

Housemates: has a chapter plot and main dialouge written (first day of school wonder how that goes...)

Gremlins: I'm actually torn about my original ending on this. Everyone who has watched the movie gremlins knows what happens in the end... there is a lot of surprising stuff along the way but... I'm currently bouncing the ending around right now. #savetheboys #originalending

Dire Wolf: chapter has already been written just needs some editing.... a little angst ridden but all good things to come. Plus a POV of rival number 1 Black himself.

I was going for a walk one day: chapter is fully fleshed but in need of some major editing before posting. All danger noodles will make an appearance.

Darling I do: half a chapter is written and I will do better because I love them and Steven is such a sweet bean and I love writing him just as much as Sans.

Zoot Suit Riot: It will be updated. I swear. I wrote a good portion of it then was hit with a bad case of writers block, as I need filler with hinted references for this one part to work for my plot device. Everything else is planned but this one tiny little thing is the hold up. Sorry for that everyone.

Undercave: this was a big hit and I notice now that I definitely wrote that when I was sick and I posted it thinking it was edited... it's not. I think I even goofed up and had the name Sans in there where it shouldn't be. Anyways chapter 2 is in the works. Shout out to Tyler for getting the Ah-Taa reference. If you never seen the South Park episode 'Bebe's boobs destroy Society' this along with the SpongeBob meme is everything I imagined when thinking about this. Prepare yourselves for some skeletons acting like wild ape men.... soon to be jealous wild ape men. Let the miscommunication hilarity ensue.

Now for something completely random! In my recovery days I got to watch trolls 2 on Hulu, as my mind was absolute mush some days and could only handle tv, and one of the songs (trolls just wanna have fun) made me imagine a funny skeleton scene for some of the lyrics (I'd imagine one of our pun filled guys but any skeleton would do):

Lived underground

To get away from the world

Till I had my life changed by a beautiful girl

Just need the guts to tell her that she's the one! (waves hand around inside empty abdominal area during the just need the guts part)

End scene

I've been told that I rewound that scene and snickered like an idiot by my S/O... and it probably (definitely) was (is) true.

Friends, Google and write the petition "Petition for an alternate ending to Deep Blue Sea" so Warner Bros. will release all the deleted scenes featuring Saffron Burrows and Thomas Jane. So that after all these years, they can delight fans with an alternate ending and deleted scenes featuring Saffron Burrows and Thomas Jane! This video is dedicated to the wonderful main characters of the film Susan McAlester and Carter Blake