I've been wanting to re-do my OCN Train fic for a while, partly because Yoon Shi Yoon's and Kyung Se Jin's doomed romance in World A is never not on my mind, but also because I finished up the last chapter in a haste and always wanted to come back to it one day and tie up any lose ends.
I am aware that it's an audience of one, and that is me, but its even more important to me that I re-do it, so anyway, today I sat down to do it.
Reader, I was appalled by the amount of errors I had left it and then published. I mean, I had gotten names wrong, which was the worst to me cause in hindsight, how could I be so sloppy omg. And the spaces I left in, the en dashes that should have been em dashes, the lack of commas where they were crucial... my list of grammatical woes is long. 🫠
I am fixing it all now but dang it, I wished I had looked at it back then with clear eyes at least one time then. Bless all the sweet hearts who read and commented on it and gamely ignored all my errors. Cause its the type of thing that would have made me nope out of a fic. The turn tables you guys. 🥲
