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hi I was wondering how do you find "theme songs" for your characters and story in general?
Oof, Iāve never been good at finding theme songs myself :( usually I startĀ with a song and then create a backstory! Nevertheless, here are some tips I managed to dig up from the internet:
1. If youāre making a fantasy setting, Two Steps From Hell makes some amazing fantasy-themed music (like itās absolutely gorgeous I cannot recommend it enough)! They work great for Dungeons and Dragons characters especially. Unfortunately, very few of the songs have lyrics, so that might be a bit of a downside if you want a song choice that specifically captures your character.
2. Someone made a Character Theme Song Ideas playlist on YouTube, so listening to it is always an option!
3. Here, here, here, and here are a few quizzes to help you decide your own personal theme song! You can answer these from an OCs perspective to get a match.
4. A great place to start is with theseĀ Pinterest song lyric boards! Scroll through them to find a quote you find relatable to your story or character and trace it back to the source song!
I need some advice. Iām trying to do this pose but Iām not sure which basic sketch looks better. I know each still needs work but which one should I focuse more on. Iām trying to get it to look like my character is in anime.
the one on left is more flat and more my style. So itāll be easy to make the picture look weird. But Iām more familiar with and can work from there.
the one on right looks more curved but bulky. So I feel itāll look too big next to the other character. Itās more what Iām going for but no matter how much I work on it it feels still off.
should I just redo another basic sketch? Please if anyone has tips it really help,
Heya pals, Mod Harmonia here!!! Sorry about the inactivity but we got a new OC! woot woot
Yo. Just read the stats!
Name: Lottie Chau
Age: 19
Alchemy: Light Fracture
H: This threw me for a loop at first⦠light fracture sounds so cool and yet so confusing!! Iāll talk more about it below.
Height: 5'6
Hair color: Dirty/Light Orangish with a. Random pale streak in the front bangs area.
H: Okay, this is actually pretty cool! I looked up the pale streak thing and apparently it does happen in real life! Itās called poliosis and is caused by an absence of melanin in your roots. It can be a hereditary thing, or⦠drumroll, please⦠it can also be caused by an excessive dose of radiation! Maybe the Gate of Truth caused her blonde streak?
Eye color: Teal Cyan Mix
Rank: State Alchemist
Title: The Luminous Alchemist
Country of Birth: Xing
Country of Residents: Amsteris
Race: Half Xingese and half Amerstrian
Enrolled in the miniskirt army for a solid 4 years. ( cuz she can )
Description - Lottie is a Light Fracture Alchemist. (Takes the gas components of the atmosphere and combines with the heat from the sun she compacts it to shards of ālightā and uses them as weapons) She is from the land of Xing but uses alchemy instead of the dragon pulse. Yada Yada she is hotheaded and such but is very good at long range attacks. Think Maes Hughs with his throwing knives. Also due to opening the gate of truth while attempting to bring her little brother back to life she lost her sense of touch in both her arms.
H: Iāve just spent, like, 30 minutes researching light compression, and Iām actually very intrigued! None of the sources Iāve found can really agree, but sources from MIT and Harvard both claim that solid light is possible.
In this article, scientist Jared Cole says that, theoretically, by changing the state of photons, they could create ācrystalsā of light molecules (Iām totally not freaking out about how cool this is!!!!!). The only roadblock? There isnāt technology advanced enough to prove their results. But considering your OC is in the world of Fullmetal Alchemist, this doesnāt matter!
Another source talks about the physical effect of compressed light on people, and, considering your alchemist is actively bending the substance, I thought it might be important. Again, because itās all hypothetical, no one can really agree, but most everyone mentions that the crystal-solid-light-thing would be freezing to the touch, something like dry ice. However, seeing as Lottie lost touch in her arms, she might not notice for a while, but the subsequent effects of near-frostbite every time she uses her alchemy might cause some problemsābut it would make for a great story!
How her little brother died:
He was killed while attempting to enter the royal palace. The guards killed him and returned the body only for Lottie to preform human transmutation.
H: Why did he want to enter the palace?
( interesting plot for if she meets Ling )
H: Whew⦠that would be awkward.
Also just a small fun fact.
She is (SOMETIMES) from everyoneās Favorite Frozen Fortā¦BRIGGS!
H: SPEAKING OF FROSTBITE! If you decide to keep her light alchemyāwhich I recommendāshe could go to Briggs to find a solution for her alchemy issues!
SUMMARY:
Honestly? This is one of the best FMA characters Iāve seen so far. While her backstory might need a bit more fleshing out, her powers are creative and believable, which is incredibly rare for an OC! Great job!
HEY THIS IS VERY IMPORTANT!!!!!!! OC PSA FOR PEOPLE HAVING TROUBLE WITH OCS
Original Characters are a little hard to make. Making them decent is hard too. Now, most people would say that since it's their character, that they can do whatever they want with them, that is true, when in private. When you put your character out into the world, you should put effort into making it memorable yet realistic to the fandom you are placing it in. Here are some tips to make the character a bit more memorable and realistic.
Tattoos And Piercings: Though they are fun to play with, you have to remember how painful and time and money consuming getting a tattoo is. It can cost upwards of 150 dollars to get a tattoo, it's painful to get in many places where it is most popular to get them like the hands, pubic bones and back, not to mention the fact that it is permanent and even more painful to get rid of. Laser Treatments and cover-ups can cost more than the tattoo itself. And a teenager, 14-17 years old cannot get a tattoo. It's illegal and in all honesty stupid. How many 17-year-Olds in high school do you see with gigantic tattoos on their hands and pubic bones? Piercings are a different story, however. I donāt mind extreme Piercings as much as the average person does, I just hate the typical ones. What about the collarbone? Or a knuckle. Still, I donāt mind them.
Age: this one is oozy. Most Original Characters are between the ages of 16-21 years old. Sometimes their with characters who in canon are 26 and up. It's weird that a law-abiding adult would get with a teen just out of high school. Now, if this is part of the storyline of the romance, how it is forbidden and wrong then sure. Maybe. It has to be done intricately. And you shouldnāt be afraid of making your character 30 or so. It's not bad to be over 27 years old. Of course, it's a little hard to make it work, but it's not a bad thing.
Main Character Changing/ Cannon Manipulating: I hate this. Like, a lot. I see this the most with Voltron. Giving your character a lion that does not exist. Purple, Pink, even white and that one is a REAL HEADCANON. That is so...frustrating. The theme of Voltron is that each part has a purpose and everyone has a use, meaning togetherness and perfect sync. It's like the adult swim Voltron short with the pink lion. Look it up and youāll get how ridiculous it is to have an extra lion that doesnāt need to be there. It would be cool if your character from the future. Or has a battling bond with one of the lions. But donāt pick a color and make up a lion. It's dumb. This goes for all anime. Gurren Lagann, Any Magical Girls ETC. (I see this most with Voltron. No one needs you pink, purple, orange, Grey and white lion.)
Siblings: Sigh...if a character is an only child...their an only child. Keyword ONLY. That is part of their character. Who they are. That would change the way they act MAJORLY. They would become more caring. More sympathetic. If they have siblings, leave it at that. Its different with, For example, the Sakamaki Brothers in DL.
But make it a brotherā¦.not a sister.
I have more to say
If you have any questions concerns or things to add on please reblog and let me know ;3
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HEYAAAAAAAA its me again i made a really big mess of the old char sheet because i did it at like 3am so i decided i would redo it !! thanks again <333Ā
H: itās fine! For the second time (bc Mod Eris is lazy!!!!) Iāll be the only reviewer. Under the cut, because this one is long!
Name: Lina Schlitz - ćŖćć·ć„ćŖćć
H: Shlitz is actually a name that has mid-German origins--nothing to fix here, itās right on the SnK map!
Nicknames: Querida - pet in portuguese, given by her grandma. Idiot - given by some of her squad members. (i dont really have any other ideas for nicknames plz alp)
H: Most nicknames Iāve had or given come from inside jokes or shared experiences--a joke about her age when she started training or an alias from a battle, maybe?
Age: 17
Gender:Ā Female
Birthday: 18/11/833 - scorpio (so she would be in the ā¦. 102nd squad i think ? as she would be 17 by the time eren, mikasa, armin & the squad were 15⦠.although i kinda wanna make her older . .. should i?)
H: I honestly like making my characters older--older characters have more extensive backstories and more room for creativity. However, itās your choice in the end! (And Iām pretty sure if she was 17 while the trio were 15, sheād be in the 102nd.)
Faceclaim: michiko malandro (from michiko and hatchin)
(i think this one is the most accurate - hairstyle , face, everything, n expression)
(without the chains tho⦠and the survey corps uniform⦠and shorter hair)
H: Sheās so pretty cri
-personality:
positives;
brave - lina is not afraid to put herself in danger or do risky things, so she can get things done better than most people
decisive - she can throw her humanity out of the window to make decisions
honest - she doesnāt really care what people think of her, so she will often say what she thinks to your face
direct - as above, lina gets straight to the pointĀ
observant - she often notices the little details, from environment to facial expressions or body language
realistic - she knows that she might die any day, and she lives life to the fullest
simple - relating to her trait of being realistic, lina views life in a simple way - you either die or you donāt, and if you donāt, then you better make the most of it
kind - despite not showing it much, lina is actually quite kind due to her grandparents and parents raising her to be a good lil child
neutrals;
competitive - she loves a good competition and will never back down from a challenge
sarcastic - lina uses sarcasm to make people laugh and hide her true feelings
unsentimental - as mentioned in her trait description of decisive, she knows that herĀ
comrades, family, and friends can die any day and they have a high chance of it too, so lina detaches herself from them as much as possible
tough - lina can power through a lot of situations, as she contains her emotions on the inside
calculating - she can observe a situation and make a decision off of it, but also she is good at making plans
strong-willed - lina will not give up. ever. no way hozay
perfectionist - everything must be perfect - including her statistics, battle technique, horse, and mostly everything under the sun. however most things arenāt perfect which annoys her to no end
negative;
cocky - lina can often overestimate herself, in battle and in casual situations, which leads to her putting herself and her comrades in danger
brittle - her emotions are easily hurt, although she doesnāt show it
manipulative - lina will lead people on if it benefits her
compulsive - she often acts off of instincts and emotions alone, tying in with being cocky
disrespectful - adding in to linaās trait of being honest, she often disrespects her superiors, elders, and anyone on the planet if she feels like it - which doesnāt make her that likeableĀ
hostile - being hostile to keep people at a distance means that lina doesnāt have many friends
inconsiderate - as long as it is good enough for lina, it is good enough for you so you better not complain got it got it ok
messy - linaās bed is often unmade and her appearance is disheveled
mannerless - tying in with being disrespectful, she often licks her plates, chews with her mouth open, talks while speaking, disrespects her superiors, ect
neurotic - despite not showing it, lina often has anxiety attacks about her past and friends, and what will happen to her (her symptoms include nausea, fear of dying, a racing heart, and heightened senses - including trembling and sweating, also staring off into space)
possessive - lina is possessive of her possessions, her friends, herself, and mostly everything that she views belongs to her
procrastinator - she often pushes things like apologising, doing training, and eating, off until the last minute
sly - tying in with linaās trait of being manipulative, she can worm her way into someones mind quite easily and manipulate them for her own gain
uncooperative - she is terrible at teamwork, believing that everyone is ācramping her styleā and slowing her down, so she often refuses to work in a team and has to be forced - unless she is the leader, and then she loves to boss everyone around
sadistic - lina enjoys cutting the limbs off of titans before she kills them, however only ones that remind her of the one that killed her grandma and family - the others she has a strange interest in
cold - she often pushes people away, rejects friendship offers, and isolates herself
stubborn - once lina has decided she is doing something, there is no changing her mind
hot-tempered - she often flies off of the handle when provoked or annoyed, or if she is in a bad mood
H: So, from skimming, Iām summarizing her personality as appearing outwardly cold (though she doesnāt always mean to be) but actually being a lot different and less intense when you get to know her.
-appearance:
Hair Colour: brown-black
Hair Length/Style: mid-back length, extremely straight - tied in a high ponytail (so it is around the length of kristas/sashas)
Eye Colour: nut brown (very dark brown) with bits of lighter brown
Skin Colour: bronze-coloured
H; Seeing as the SnKverse is mostly white and light-skinned, how does her race affect her life? Iām guessing that once the Titans arrive, people donāt care what the heck you look like if youāre the one saving their asses, but maybe when she was a child?
Body build: mesomorph, a mix of hourglass and inverted triangle - lean
H: As she continues her training, sheāll begin losing weight and her hourglass figure will be less dramatic. If you want to write/draw her according to the timeline of her training, thatās a good thing to keep in mind!
Demeanor: relaxed - arms crossed, leaning on walls, slouched in chairs, head tilted back, head resting on table
Ethnicity: Brazilian/Portuguese/German/English (where is the story set in ??? nobody knows)
H: Iām not certain myself, but I made a post on where the story most likely takes place. Brazil isnāt on the map, though. You could make her Brazilian ancestry from her grandparents or great-grandparents who immigrated north. Then again, the map isnāt canon, so who cares?
Height:Ā 5'3
Weight:Ā 8 stone 6
H: Sheās slightly underweight, but enough thatās itās realistic for a malnourished environment.
Scars:Ā One down her right arm, due to when a titan had her in its mouth during an expedition and, although one of her teammates killed it, itās jaw fell onto her arm when it hit the ground and broke her arm.
-statistics:
Combat: 9/10
Hand to Hand Combat:Ā 7/10
Agility:Ā 4/10
Initiative: 8/10
Wits: 5/10
Teamwork:Ā 4/10
3D Maneuvering Gear: 6/10
Offense: 9/10
Defense: 4/10
Cockiness: 10/10
Titan Kills:Ā
Solo: 11
In team: 21Ā (is this ok ?? i assumed since she was 2 years older, p good at fighting, and in the scouting legion, that she would have a higher kill count than say, mikasa, even though sheās an ackerman, because mikasa is 2 years younger and hasnāt been on that many expeditions)
H: Sure! The 102nd would most likely have a pretty high kill count,seeing as a lot of battles happen after their training.
Grad Rank:Ā 1st (ahh is this ok too? i thought since she was in the 102nd squad, and her family was in the military, that she could be 1st since there arenāt any y'know titan shifters or ackermans in her squad)
H: Also fine! The 104th was a special case--standards likely wouldnāt be as high in other training corps.
Grade: A
background:
linaās ancestors moved with most of the world to germany inside the walls, the only safe place on the eartha lot of her family died on the way, only two survived along with a few other people - a wife and her husband, alanza and lucas santos - not much older than 18.
when they made it to the walls, they were given a small, one bedroom house inside wall maria, shinganshina district as they were one of the last people to arrive.
after a few years, they had a child together, and his name was to be victor. they taught their native language, portuguese told him to teach it to his future children to keep their country alive.
lucas decided to enroll in the military and joined the garrison to try and keep his family safe, but he was tragically killed when an abnormal titan flung themselves on top of the wall and ran along it, crushing the garrison underfoot.
it was eventually killed, with the help of one of the first elite teams and the scouting legion. lucas was one of the soldiers tragically killed in the attack and alanza was left to raise victor by herself.
when victor was a teenager, he too joined the military - scouting legion - despite his mothers wishes. he managed to survive, however, long enough for him to be promoted to team leader - and for his arm to be bitten off in a mission, not long after his promotion. he was discharged by the military and met a girl by the name of hanna.
it was love at first sight, and they married only a few months after they met - after all, they could die at any time.
alanza was soon a grandmother to a child of the name sofia.
by this time, the schlitz/santos line had become quite legendary in the walls, due to their skill and unwavering determination to help mankind.
this cycle of the generations was continued until it got to maria and dedrick - linaās grandparents. their father, abe, had been brutally eaten alive by a titan.
due to this they were both firmly against any of their children or grandchildren joining the military in fear of their safety, and so the cycle ended. that is, until lina was born from delmira and adelchi - maria and dedrickās daughter and step-son.
as soon as abe saw her face he knew she would join the military despite anyones wishes.
as lina grew up, abeās prediction slowly came true - she idolized the military due to their unwavering bravery and optimism that humanity would win the war between them and titans.
she was often caught sneaking out of her house to watch the scouting legion coming home from missions, cheering them on despite the crowds nervous and dejected muttering. so it was no surprise when, on her 12th birthday, the first thing she asked for was to join the military. (that lil shmishirt)
she persisted until her grandparents were brought to her house the next day from their home in wall rose. they told her of all the dangers, and yet she still persisted. they finally agreed - but only because linaās father said he would join with her.
as soon as the words came out of his mouth, a loud bang rang out that shook the floor and
caused panicked screaming to be erupted from outside. linaās family rushed through their front door, only for them to be met with a crowd of people sprinting past, yelling and screaming.
they pushed through the crowd and found themselves at the back of another crowd, all staring up at the wall. a giant titan, over 50 metres tall, was standing behind it - looking down at the people of shiganshina with a blank expression, its hand clutching the wall. steam came off of it, increasing the temperature of lina despite how far away it was.
her family was frozen, huddling together and clutching each others hands. maria - linaās grandmother - was clutching the cross and figures of wall maria, rose, and sina attached to her necklace and praying.
the titan moved its foot back and kicked the gate, sending it splintering all over the town. titans waiting behind it were catapulted forwards, crushing citizens and soldiers along with the multiple boulders.
linaās family turned and ran as fast as they could. despite being old, linaās grandparents were fit and kept up with her family - delmira dragging lina by her hand.
they made it to the docks in wall maria just as the last boat was leaving. delmira, with lina in tow, immediately began to shove her way to the front to plead with the soldiers to let lina on board. they denied her request and delmira whispered something to lina. they hugged each other as long as possible before delmira broke away and disappeared into the crowd.
luckily, the guards were distracted by the giant horde of people trying to break through. lina ran up the docks, as far away from the crowd as possible, and found herself level with a boat - it looked full to the brim. lina looked to the next one and eyed it apprehensively. stepping back a few paces, she sprinted as fast as possible towards the ledge. pushing herself off of it.
her hands reached out to the edge of the boat, but the side of the boat was slippery and her hands couldnāt get a grip in time.
lina scrabbled for a grip, her fingers of her left hand slowly slipping off as she began to fall, but before she could, her wrist was snatched up by a calloused hand.
she looked up to see a friend of her mothers, adelmo weber, holding onto her arm. he pulled her up and onto the boat, despite the outrage that burst from the lips of the citizens that there wasnāt any space left on the boat, and even though she was just a child, he should have not saved her.
lina looked back just in time to see the crowd of people frantically running away - towards wall rose - from a titan, nearly 10 metres tall, picking them up and eating them like insects.
the manic crowd drew level with linaās boat, and she made eye contact with her grandma - at the back, out of breath - as she was snatched up by the titan.
lina screamed loudly, screaming at her grandmother to fight, fight the titan and get to wall rose - but it was futile.
the titan bit maria in half and let her severed legs fall to the ground as lina finally reached the edge of the boat, stretching out her hand to her grandmothers half-eaten corpse and the rest of her family.
the crowd was surrounded by titans coming from both sides and they were all massacred.
lina slumped down to the floor of the boat, and cried until she could cry no more. she slept until they reached wall rose.
H; Holy crap, all of this when she was 12? Poor kid! She probably has a lot of left-over trauma and stress from that day: PTSD, anxiety, possibly some extreme paranoia and OCD-like tendencies to check over and over that everything is okay.
the arrival of the boats was not received well by the residents of wall rose. they immediately began to riot about food shortages, overpopulation and that the titans would be drawn to the bigger population of wall rose.
lina exited across the drawbridge with the swarm of people who was on her boat, and they were promptly greeted by being pushed back by the citizens of wall rose.
they said that the other boats were too full, and they would not have enough room for all of the people on linaās boat.
the people onboard rioted immediately, calling out where would they go, would you be so heartless as to send us back - until they were silenced by the garrison and military police separating the brawling crowds.
they told all the refugees to go to the town square, where the people of appropriate build and age would be enlisted to the military with no choice, while the rest would go to work in the fields.
lina was enlisted despite being only just 12, and so began the start of her journey.
H: Woah, thatās young, even for SnK! Was she the only recruit of her age? Was she the focus of unwanted attention because of it? I have a student one year younger than the rest of the class at school and heās always being picked on by the teacher (who I hate but thatās another story).
H: My parentsā first languages were French and Arabic, and they do this all the time too! Nothing really important, I just wanted to add that. :)
she has the loudest, most boisterous laugh ever - although nobody has ever properly heard it
lina snores so loud she often kept the rest of her dormies awake
biggest sweet tooth ever - even though she rarely gets to eat anything other than beef stew and rations
H: This might not have been intentional, but people who experience traumatic events as children usually end up keeping childlike qualities with them for a long amount of time. Having a sweet tooth or sleeping with toys is not unusual for someone who went through what she did.
she has a bit of a portuguese/brazilian accent, mixed with english/german
lina cuts her own hair
her name means the heroes river, or river of light
SUMMARY-
H: To be honest, this characterās pretty airtight! Thereās not much you really need to change on this one. Sheās believable but still interesting enough to be a main character. Overall, great job!!
Quotes: āIf youāre just standing there doing nothing to help, I swear, Rachel, Iām going to kick someoneās ass, and you know damn well who.ā
āI do not care WHAT you were going to say, but Iāll take your piece of cake and make it hostage, for you do not do anything stupid.ā
āWhy do you care? Go do something useful and donāt think about my safety. Yours is more important.ā
H: This is also a really long review, so under the cut! Iāll be the only mod reviewing this one.
General Characteristics-
Name: Katherine Apprill Jenkins
Nickname(s): Kate (mostly used by Rachel), Jenkins (most of the higher-ups), Susan Jenkins (Levi when needs her attention), Catty (when being teased)
H: The nicknames are really creative, but why does Levi call her Susan? Did she tell him who she was? How did it affect their relationship?
Affiliation: Survey Corps, Special Operations Squad
Former Affiliation: 104th Training Corps
H: WOOO, 104th! My favorite thing about the AoT series is that OCs can be in the 104th Corps. Unfortunately, that means she canāt be in the top 10. :(
(to her (future) significant other) www.youtube.com/watch?v=R4svwoQad6k&list=PLD511BA65BC4B66AF&index=5
(actual) www.youtube.com/watch?v=5KHEv5HMsWc
Zodiac: Aquarius
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Physical Characteristics-
Accessories: None
Knowledge: 9/10
Conceptualization Power: 5/10
Motivation: 9/10
Will to Act: 10/10
Agility: 5/10
3D Maneuvering Gear: 8/10
H: Low agility and high 3DMG stats sounds like an interesting combination! Does it cause some trouble?
Swordsmanship: 7/10
Hand-to-Hand Combat:: 3/10
Long Range Accuracy: 4/10
H: Itās really rare to see an AoT OC with low battle stats and agility. I like where youāre going with her!
Strategy: 9/10
H: Earlier, you gave her low conceptualization power but high strategy. How does her mind work? Iām not saying you should change the scores--in fact, it might be more interesting to explain how she comes up with battle plans when she canāt conceptualize.
Teamwork: 6/10
Offense: 7/10
Defense: 5/10
Social Skills: 4/10
Dress Style/Wardrobe: Survey Corps jacket, White long-sleeved shirt, white pants, dark brown sash around the waist, dark brown knee-high boots, green cloak
Eye Color: Green
Equipment: 3DMG complete with snap-off blades
Gender: Female
Hair Color: Redhead
Height: 5'7" (170 cm)
Most Valuable Possession: A gold bracelet with āSusan Jenkinsā written on it, which Katherine has since birth
H: I really like this tidbit! Who was Susan and where did she get the bracelet?
Nationality: British with both American parents
H: I made a post about AoT OCs a while ago, where I talked about character nationality. In the series, America is never mentioned, and most characters come from Europe. I would personally recommend that you change her parentsā nationalities, but seeing as the location of the AoTverse hasnāt been confirmed, you donāt have to.
Scars: One on her left knee, and a few on her back and shoulders
H: To add complexity to her background, explain where she got these. Maybe a fight, or an injury as a child?
Weight: 127 lbs (58 kg)
H: She seems pretty thin, but it could be because of malnutrition. Then again, Wall Sina (Sina? Sheena?) is mostly rich. Did her parents use up all of their money to move inside Wall Sina and ended up poor? Were they rich but she lost weight after running away?
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Personal Characteristics-
Birth Date: August 23
Birth Place: Yarckel District, Wall Sina (or Sheena, whatever)
First Word(s): āPapaās songā
H: This is really sweet!
Parents: Ronald and Emma Jenkins
Siblings: Katherine Apprill Jenkins (stillborn)
H: Having a stillborn sibling can be hard, especially when you share a name. Did this affect her relationship with her parents and herself?
Death Date: N/A
Age at Death: N/A
Death Place: N/A
Resting Place: N/A
Last Word(s): She has already thought about them and has them ready
H: It seems like a small addition, but this says a lot about her character. I like it!
Primary Objective: Rachel says is for avenge the death of all the victims of Shiganshina, but Katherine never said that it was all the truth. So everyone else just assume that itās somehow related to her family or friends, and she doesnāt want to talk about why sheās there or what are her main goals
H: Does she have a reason for not telling or is she just awkward?
Secondary Objective(s): Keep Rachel safe and protect the humanity
Priorities: Herself, Rachel, her friends and her family
Motivation: Rachel and herself. If it were not for the hope of living a happy life with her best friend after destroying all the titans, she would have gone insane and would throw herself into the mouth of a titan at the first opportunity.
H: I can tell that Rachel is a really important person to her. Does she feel guilty when Rachel is injured, even when itās not her fault?
Accomplishments:
Solo Titan Kills: 9
Team Titan Kills: 25
Greatest Achievement: Helping humanity take back Wall Maria and Shiganshina District
Failures: Letting Jean irritate enough to fight physically with him, became too afraid of telling her parents about entering the Survey Corps and running away because of it
Biggest Failure: Feeling overconfident on her first battle and almost being killed as consequence
Self-Confidence: Kate has trouble trusting herself. Sometimes she is overconfident and thinks that she can defeat anyone (and ends up being defeated), at other times she trusts herself in a healthy measure, and at other times she simply thinks she can not do anything useful. Rachel is always there to make her go back to the healthy measure of self-confidence
Traumas: Hearing her parents discussing about her dead twin for the first time when she was really young
Embarrassment: Being scolded by Levi because of her fight with Jean (being scolded by her own crush, I would be embarrassed too)
H: Yikes⦠so would I.
Worries: She worries too much about Rachel, Wallace and Oliver, even if theyāre actually good on protecting themselves she just can not think the worst will not happen.
H: Do they get annoyed at her overprotectiveness or do they understand?
Earliest Memory: Hearing her father singing for her when she was three years old
Fondest Memory: When she showed Rachel all her grandfatherās paintings of the outside world
Worst Memory: Seeing her comrades dying right in front of her, she was trying to help fighting against the Female Titan and after had to race back to the walls
Favorite Dream: Rachel and her living a happy life, free of titans and walls, with her other best friends together, every comrade alive and well with them
Worst Nightmare: Everyone is dead. Katherine is shaking as she was when she was held by a titan in her first battle. Female Titan, Armored Titan, Colossal Titan, Beast Titan, all of them are just ahead of her eating her best friends and she can not do anything to stop it.
H: Her nightmare has to do with being powerless; you could tie in her fear of losing control with anxiety and her overprotective nature.
Desires: to be free from these walls, this king and these titans along with all the people she cares about
Wishes: That her mother and father could see how much she changed and got better. Of course, to her it is a silly wish, but is what she wanted
Secrets: Her crush on Levi Ackerman (she think it is, but is pretty obvious)
Confidantes: Rachel and William
Soft Spots: The ācute dog face that fell from the change truckā thing and being called Susan.
Quirks: Is annoyed by people prone to fidgeting with things, is fascinated with bees, always have to scream once in the day āBRIOCHEā and/or āSAUERKRAUTā on Oliverās ears because he get so mad (and is funny)
Dominant Hand: Ambidextrous
Catchphrase: āIām not going to listen your stupidity.ā
H: RUDE.
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Mental Characteristics-
Attitude: Most of the time Katherine shows little to no emotions, but when sheās with her āsquadā (three childhood friends, Rachel, Wallace and Oliver) she becomes more sociable. Short-tempered when it comes to idiotic things. No matter what, she will try to protect her close friends if theyāre in danger but Kate gets embarrassed when sheās the one being saved. Kate is emotional and sensible inside, but acts stone cold when she thinks emotions will interfere (almost all the time). Sheās gentle and polite normally, but get angry easily and then she become violent and rude to her angerās target.
H: These are really well written and realistic characters, well done!
Bad Habits: Following people if is bored, talking alone, breaking the rules if she think she needs
Good Habits: Help her comrades on trainings, discuss all her strategies with the others
Known Languages: English, French and a little about German
H: Where did she learn these? Was it taught to her by her parents or did she teach herself?
Pet Peeves: Idiotic comments, people who are drumming their fingers in things
Phobias: Ankylophobia (Fear of immobility of a joint)
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Spiritual Characteristics-
Animal: Owl
Superstitions: Every Friday 13th is a dangerous day and bad events can happen to people
Strengths: Protecting her friends, trusting her comrades and her will to survive
Weaknesses: Overconfidence (or lack of confidence at times)
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Residential Characteristics-
Citizenship: Wall Sina (or Sheena, whatever again)
Hometown: Yarckel District
Sleep Patterns: Katherine usually sleeps 3 hours and take naps during daytime
Traditions: Scream āBRIOCHEā and/or āSAUERKRAUTā on Oliverās ears once in the day, before a mission Katherine takes out her bracelet and think about the āother Katherineā, then put it back
H: Is Susan Jenkins another name for her twin?
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Interpersonal Connections-
Friends: Oliver (OC), Wallace (OC), Rachel (OC), Sasha, Connie, Armin, Eren, Mikasa, Hanji, Levi (ā¦or she does think he is), William (my friendās OC)
Immediate Family: Ronald Jenkins (Father), Emma Jenkins (Mother), Katherine Jenkins (Twin sister, stillborn)
Inspirations: Levi, Armin Arlet, Eren Yeager (Jaeger, whatever)
Rivals: Jean Kirschtein
First Love: Oliver Schmit
Love Interest(s): Levi Ackerman and William Knox
H: This is a good place to expand on her relationships! Do William and Levi know she likes Ā them, and do they care? Are they jealous of each other?
Significant Other: None - sheās single
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Highs and Lows-
Likes: Reading mystery/thriller books, opening up to who she trust wholeheartedly, calm and silent places, home
Dislikes: Being angry, fighting against humans, fake smiles and fake people, being alone, misunderstandings
Favorite Animal: Cat
Favorite Color: Green
Favorite Drink: Coffee
Favorite Excuse: Unless she was doing something sheās comfortable, she will tell the truth. If itās a secret or uncomfortable thing, āI was occupied enoughā
Favorite Food: Apple pie
Favorite Number: 57
Favorite Pastime: Reading
Favorite People: The trio (Oliver, Wallace and Rachel), her two love interests
Favorite Place: Her room, as she made him look quite like his room at home
Favorite Quote From Another Character: I donāt like the terms āgood personā or ābad personā because it is impossible to be entirely good to everyone - Armin Arlert
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Social Characteristics-
Communication: Katherine speaks politely and carefully so people understand exactly what she means, except when she relies on the person enough to speak in a more informal and less cautious way. When she gets angry she simply talks everything she feels or thinks about the person, rudely and maliciously, to hurt that person
Criminal Record: She doesnāt have a criminal record
Discrimination: Even if she donāt want to, Kate look down at the Military Police and the ones that run away for fear, especially the last one, because even if she is scared she fights (and, secretly, she remembers when she runned away from home and feel regret of being like those people).
Dominance: Following is always the best for her. She listen to her higher-ups well, but if Katherine feels that they are wrong, Kate knows that she needs to lead the ones that feel the same way that her.
Emotional Stability: Depending the topic of conversation or situation, the little Jenkins can explode or suppress her emotions until sheās all alone. Alone the girl cry all she needs to cry or hit something until it is in pieces. Normally Kate express herself if she feels comfortable, mostly when surrounded by friends or people she can trust.
Expression: The Jenkins almost all the time wears a blank expression, but if sheās with her friends or alone, you can see how she really is and feels.
Humor: With her friends she joke sometimes, but she isnāt the funny type
Liveliness: Once you gain her trust and/or affection, Kate will slowly open up and relax around you
Mannerisms: She moves her legs a little when sheās been waiting for a long time, runs her hand through her hair when sheās about to say something difficult or uncomfortable to someone else, scratches the back of her neck when sheās nervous, blink more than usual when she hears something unexpected or gets confused
Patience: āEverything has a limit,ā she would say if someone asked why she did not wait for 2 hours to receive a piece of apple pie
Reputation: For the others in Survey Corps, sheās the girl who got a scolding from Captain Levi after fighting with Jean or the girl who makes good strategies, for those in the Military Police sheās the girl who makes great strategies and does not show emotions, for those who are in the Garrison is who helped to take back Wall Maria, and for normal people she is the daughter of a wealthy couple who has a twin who was born dead and was named with the name that would be her sister
H: Sheās really complex!
Sociability: She does not approach other people unless she really admire that person or think is necessary. Usually people approach her
H: In general, I think you wrote her really well and realistically. She has an interesting backstory, but there are a few inconsistencies, and a few places where you could add more. Sheās a really promising start, though!