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Compassion: 9/10

Bitterness: 2/10 (Only bitter at Solas lmao)

Happiness: 7/10

Politeness: 6/10

Chivalry: 9/10

Pride: 3/10

Honesty: 9/10

Bravery: 5/10

Recklessness: 10/10

Ambition: 7/10

Loyalty: 10/10

Love: 10/10

Sense of Family: 11/10 (say what you want about his flaws, he's a papa's/vorgoth's boy forever)

Agility: 3/10

Sex Drive: Is Emmrich in the room? 100/10

Thanks @willtheweaver for the tag! This is so cute!

Premise: Answer the above question using a scale from 1-10 and context

Jan Xiaoli (Built on Ruins) This guy was born to give the best cuddles, he basically has the "free hugs" sign on his forehead, and he will cuddle strangers tenderly as his own family. He wishes all problems could be solved by cuddling 100/10

Shi Saxe (Built on Ruins) If you're not a close friend, please don't even try or you might get seriously hurt. 3/10

Thiery (Foreigner God) A solid cuddler, but a bit picky about who he cuddles. If you deserve his trust or are someone in need of a good cuddle, then he will deliver expertly. 8/10

Yarren (Foreigner God) Would you cuddle a porcupine? Yarren is the human equivalent of that. He only cuddles when he's emotionally compromised and even then he has to be wrestled into it. 1/10

Auric Montes (WGM) In his case it's not about not wanting to cuddle, but he simply doesn't know how to. He last cuddled before he left home to join the Order and even before that cuddling in his family was sparse. He would try in the right circumstances but it would be very awkward. 2/3

Dante Pritchard (WGM) Due to his power being triggered by skin-to-skin contact he would have to be careful, but he LOVES cuddling. 7/10

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Recently she’s received a huge update since in terms of how long this side blog has been around- she’s one of my oldest ocs

Just a quick note- [Redacted] is used in place of an actual dead name

It’s something the character wouldn’t tell anyone (to quote her “it’s none of your fuckin business) so that’s a reason why I haven’t given her one

Also don’t mind the logo- it’s drawn with a shitty iPhone and one finger

First I'd like to apologize for the delay, life has had me busy, but here I am with the OC rating.

So taking into consideration an AU where women are included in DRB, the basic info up front is nice, first appearance seems simple (not a bad thing) though she's rather tall for a woman, so that stands out.

She seems to be an act first ask question later type of person. Seems like the typical rough exterior and softer on the inside type, she seems to have good intentions at heart.

Her name makes me wonder about where she is from, since it's not a Japanese name. The info does say she's wiped her records, but I wonder why? It seems she had a semi-normal childhood until Chuuoku took over and sounds like her mother went on a power trip. I'd like to know more about why that happened, I am curious.

I am also very curious about how the timeline lines up with Lana and the Party of words, it's hard to picture. Her current age is 29. It's a bit confusing, though it could be just that her age isn't lining up with current cannon time and it's further in the future than current. More details on it would be nice.

She has an interesting ability, I like it. The speakers are fitting for the job she has, that's good. I am having a hard time picturing the mic, but I still think it's fitting to her as a person.

From what I have read, with the information I was given, I'd give her a 6.5/10. I'd like to learn more about her family and past to paint a clearer picture, but I think what there is so far is not bad.

Thank you for the ask, and the chance to talk about my OCs!

🔫: Would this character make a good bodyguard?

Rating: 7/10, slightly better than average

Reason: Ian is observant, quick-thinking, and ultimately half-decent in a fight thanks to good instincts and lots of yoga that ultimately helps prevent stiff movements or low stamina when running. He can keep the person he's guarding safe from danger by sneaking around under the radar, and will have a slight advantage in a fight if he has the element of surprise on his side. He's also the type to give off a calming energy, which helps anyone he's guarding feel at ease. That said, he loses points in a few areas.

No formal training in weapons use, magic, or martial combat. He makes it all up as he goes, which is not what you generally seek out in a bodyguard.

He has a high-metabolism yoga body -- not much fat by nature, not much muscle thanks to lack of training. His punches... don't do a whole lot unless, like I said, he has the element of surprise.

His physique also means he's not very intimidating, so he can't scare would-be criminals away from the person he's guarding by sheer threatening aura alone. He simply doesn't have one. If anything, he has friendly basset hound energy most of the time.

👽: Would this character be a good person for aliens to meet first? What impression would those aliens have about humanity/the character's species based on them?

A: 8/10, pretty good actually

Reason: Ian is an adaptable person with a desire to understand the people around him. He's good at making people feel heard when they speak -- and, in the case of his situationally mute boyfriend, when they communicate in other ways. He'd be quick to figure out a way to bridge any language gaps between species. He also has that calm dog energy, so he wouldn't leave a hostile impression. He's fairly knowledgeable about geography, too, and could roughly give any visitors enough basic information to get their bearings socially. He's not the best example of social norms himself, but he knows enough to blend in. He loses points on this score for his peaceful atmosphere making him -- and humanity itself -- look like a pushover, and simply very much not wanting to talk to aliens. He's already the only one without magic in a group of magic-users. He's fine not being the only human in a group of aliens, too. He'll just read his books and do his yoga, thank you very much.

Also, on top of seeming like pushovers, aliens would assume that humans typically have polyamorous relationships, perform extravagant courting rituals, and enjoy tea. People who hate tea or polyamory would throw them off completely.

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Hey, I’m Cole! I used to review OCs in my past, years ago, and I quit after a while, but I’m back in business. 

Soon, I’ll create a fandoms list and how to apply,  but it’s okay if you want me to judge an oc out of a fandom that I know or a fandomless one, just be aware I’m not educated on how the series is. 

Oh dear lord, this is a tough one.

Firstly Myself.....I’m kidding, though I can be very awkward at times.

First I want to say Elvin WIlliams. (Moonfall.) His existence is an awkward foray into me making a character living the life of a successful author who is in a polyamorous relationship with two girls who are in turn dating each other. I look back and I feel awkward about it.

Davis Mort (Moonfall): This is a fun story that rose up from my feelings and fears of not being able to get with someone who would love me. As such, I created this single, lives with a cat, easily misunderstood guy who though he does look at a lot of pornography or play a lot of sex sims.....he’s a decent guy. The funny thing was the fact that later on, he ends with what can only be described as a succubus....well kind of. It’s a long story that involves the fall of atlantis and an Angry Moon God.

Finally, number one in my top three Awkward characters is.....

Harvey Xlezp'vam-raok (Noctis)

Okay firstly I must explain what he is. He is a Fish Person technical term is Faeryin. He’s awkward because of the fact he spent most of his life, afraid that his existence would lead to some sort of rebellion. He has the blood and crest (Head fin.) of his kinds ancestral warrior kings, before the Lichites of long ago ended almost all of them. At least one survived the genocide that, though initiated by lichtes, was carried out by fellow Faeryin. Worst thing, as a juvenille he had to be afraid of becoming aroused as Faeryin with head fins pop up when aroused as to show themselves off to a potential mates. He has fins that glow and shimmer like jewels of the deep.

Yeah, he has a lot to worry about in his mind.

---- You asked for a rating but I'll throw in a quick critique too. The overall design is pretty interesting. The ears match his species rather well (I needed to rummage through your page to figure out what kind of bat her was XD), but the wings are rather small. They almost become lost within the rest of the design. The colors are simple yet effective, the golds of the gloves and shoes complimenting the eyes well and matching with the purples of his fur nicely. The spikes jetting out from his shoulders create a nice, sharp charm to him, though I feel that he doesn't so much need the spikes on his legs since the ones on his shoes would compliment the shoulders enough. My only big issue with the design are the eyelashes, since they are very gender-specific trait in the Sonic universe and there is no info on the character where I can judge whether him having eyelashes would be justifiable. I can only assume from your page that he is some pretty-boy/heartthrob. The flower seems a bit random, though I assume he uses it often. I'd play around with different flower species to see which one would suit him best, because this particular one is very out-standing and draws attention towards it rather than the character.

With that said, I will give him a 7 out of 10. He has unique features that allow him to stand out, which is really good, but there are still parts that can be worked on.

Thanks for submitting him. c: