#mmfc lou

I wanted to draw this with all my OCs, but I realized that I won't have time til the end of this month... X[

So here's just these two duh

(cringe warning eageagadsgdhdjdhj)

Mess and Lou says bi rights!1!

The June's still going, so Happy Pride Month everyone yet again! Be happy! Be yourself!

Part 1 “Big plans”

Author's note: Yeah, I did it... I DID IT!!!

Note before the part: Enjoy the first part of my fic... ;]

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Another school day is began in Silicon City. Everything around is calm, nothing foreshadowed any troubles. Although the only thing that even slightly bothered the citizens of Silicon City, is that the number of crimes in the city is increasing and increasing. Just the other day, somehow managed to detain one of the known criminals of Silicon City whom everyone called The Fog Ghost. He made a real fog chaos in the bank, but why he needed it, he, of course, refused to explain. And that is why the citizens were wary. But in general, no one shows it.

Student Aki Light was walking quietly to school, and Chaotique decided to see him off. A couple in love sometimes looked at each other with a smile.

"Thank you for choosing to see me off, Kay-Kay" — Aki said smiling at his girlfriend — "But are you sure you won't be late for your school? You said your school is far away from here"

"Hah, forgot that it only takes me a couple of seconds to get to school from anywhere in the city? It's okay, you don't have to worry about me" — Chaotique replied, also smiling.

Aki let out a light chuckle at that. But then, for some reason, his expression slightly frowned. Kay-Kay noticed this and got a little worried.

"Is everything okay, Aki?" — She asked with a concerned look.

"Oh, yes, of course, I'm fine. It's just that there's so much going on lately. You know the crime rate is getting even higher than usual. I'm just, uh... A little stressed out about it all, as my whole family. But overall I'm fine." — The brown-haired boy explained, trying to keep a wide smile on his face.

Robotic girl with a bangs looked at him with sympathy, but still smiled slightly — "Oh, I understand... But I'm glad that you're all okay overall. I hope someday this all will end."

Both Aki and Chaotique were already approaching the school. There they met their friends, Chauncey and Rita.

"Hey Chauncey! Hey Rita!" — They spoke to the two of them in sync.

Both Chauncey and Rita greeted them back. Chauncey then turned back to Rita to continue their conversation.

"Well, Ree, good luck at school, as they say, study well, well, etc. But if someone offends you, then you immediately call me, they will find out what asphalt tastes like!" — The scissors robot said with confidence, placing his hands on Rita's shoulders.

The cross-eyed girl giggled at this. — "Oh Chauncey, I know you care a lot about me, but honestly, you don't have to worry so much about me. The only thing that can offend me are the walls and poles that for some reason constantly come across my way. But this is also my fault basically on my own, but never mind. Thank you for your support." — She said, smiling broadly at Chauncey. Chauncey smiled back at her.

Both hugged each other tightly. As soon as Rita turned around to go to the school, she crashed into a pole. As always.

"OUCH! Agh, who put up the poles here??" — She said a bit annoyed, but immediately calmed down and went to the school.

And Chauncey remained in place for a while, looking after Rita with a gentle smile. But then he felt someone next to him and turned around. He saw Iceman in front of him.

"Gah! Ice! Don't scare me like that again please!" — Exclaimed Chauncey, startled.

The white-blue robot chuckled at it and spoke in a bit sly tone. — "C'mon bro, already admit that you like Rita, I can see how you have become attached to each other lately!"

"No, it's not true! Rita and I are just best friends, nothing more!" — Cutman protested, blushing a bit.

"«Just best friends», of course I know that excuse... At first you say you're just friends, but in the end it turns out that you're in love with each other..." — Iceman replied slightly annoyed, but in a bit mocking tone.

Cutman and Iceman continued to argue for a little while, and at this time the couple in love, Aki and Chaotique, had already approached the school.

"Well Kay-Kay, see you after school?" — Aki asked, smiling at his girlfriend.

"You even asking, of course yes! And if you'll need any help, call me." — Chaotique replied, smiling back at her boyfriend.

They kissed each other on the cheek. Chaotique headed towards her school with her super speed, while Aki went to his school.

And all this time, none of the guys suspected that they were being followed. No one noticed the little drone that was flying over everyone and stalking someone.

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"Well, great, it seems that everyone who is needed is in place..." — The tall bot in dark purple colors and luminous eyes said to himself. His name is Captain Darkshade. He was the one who's stalking our guys through the drone in his lair. — "Time to let the dark horse in... Mess!"

The robotic prankster girl, also known as a known criminal named Mess, flinched when she heard her name from her boss. She immediately walked over to him and stood up quietly.

"Yes, boss...?" — Mess said in a nervous voice.

Captain Darkshade turned to his henchwoman and spoke in a cold tone. — "You remember our plan, don’t you?..." — He asked, looking coldly into the young criminal's eyes.

The robotic criminal prankster girl swallowed nervously and replied. — "Y-yes, boss..."

"Great. Now go to school and do everything according to plan. And at least try not to disappoint me this time..." — The tall bot said in an even colder tone.

"Yes, boss...." — Mess replied timidly, looking at the floor a little sadly.

Mess ran from the lair to Aki's school with super speed, leaving Captain Darkshade and the rest of her allies in the lair.

Mess ran into the school and of course no one noticed her. She ran all over the school system setting up something, but what exactly is unknown, as it is part of her boss's plan.

When she was done, she ran to her locker and locked herself in to transform into her real form, under the name Melissa. She cautiously peeked out of the locker to make sure no one was watching her. Once out of the locker, she looked around again, just in case. She exhaled and took her bag from the locker. She took the powder and covered her scar on her eye with it.

Just then, a small robotic spider with a bandaged paw climbed onto Melissa's shoulder. He looked at Melissa and began to beep something in his own language. Melissa looked at him and, looking around again, answered quietly to him.

"Don't worry Lou, this time it will be all right, I'm sure of it. Now quickly hide in my bag." — Said robotic girl with dyed bangs to her little friend. Lou rolled his four eyes and jumped into Melissa's bag.

Melissa silently walked towards her classroom. There was only one thing in her thoughts - if only this plan would work.

The lesson has begun. Aki's class was in Hal's class. Everyone listened to the teacher's explanations and almost fell asleep. Only Bert listened with interest to Hal.

Suddenly, Aki began to have some strange forebodings. He seemed to suspect that something bad was about to happen. He began to look around suspiciously. The redhead cross-eyed girl noticed this and, in a whisper, spoke to Aki, but as always she doesn't said his name correctly. — "Are you okay, Kiko friend? Is something wrong?"

Aki jumped a little in surprise and, looking at his friend, let out a nervous chuckle. — "Oh, no no, I'm fine Rita, honestly. I just, uh... I just probably didn't get enough sleep, hehe... And please, remember finally, I'm Aki, not Kiko."

Rita, confused, blinked her eyes a couple times, but then she smiled slightly and didn't bother Aki anymore.

It would seem that everything is calm and nothing bad can happen. But suddenly there was a sound of an explosion. At first, everyone looked at each other, thinking that maybe it just seemed. But actually it is not. Another explosion sounded. Aki was the first to run out of the classroom and saw everyone running down the hallway towards the exit. He smelled burning, and then he heard someone in the crowd shouting "Fire! Everyone out!". Then Aki realized what had happened.

Aki's entire class also ran towards the exit. And Aki himself with his siblings ran to a secluded place to transform into Megaman, Namagem and Zero. The fire flare up more and more, the smoke gradually filled the school building.

"Everyone out! Quick, quick, quick!" — Megaman shouted, controlling with Namagem and Zero the crowd so that everyone could run out of the school at time.

A figure of a robotic girl appeared on the roof of the school. It was Mess who proud of herself watched over as the crowd scattered in fright in all directions. Now she has one step left - the battle with Megaman and his siblings. She believed that this time everything would work out.

"Alright, did everyone leave the building?" — Namagem asked, looking around the crowd.

"Hm... Wait, where's Rita?! Has anyone seen my foster sister?!" — Bert exclaimed, noticing that Rita was not among them all.

And at this time, Cutman and Iceman ran up to the school, noticing what was happening with their friends.

"Guys, how did this happened?! And where's Rita?!" — Cutman screamed in fright.

Everyone looked at each other. They understood that Rita had stay in the school.

"Oh no... I guess she's still in the school..." — Megaman said, also scared for his friend who still in the burning building.

"I'm going to save her!!" — Chauncey yelled with a fear and confidence. He began to walk towards the school, but Iceman stopped him by grabbed his arm.

"Chauncey, no! It's a dangerous!" — He said, scared for his brother.

Chauncey looked back at Iceman and, getting a bit angry, replied to him. — "I do not care if it's a dangerous or not, nothing can stop me if I should to save the one who I care about!!"

"Then I'll save Rita! She's my foster sister and I'm going to save her through thick and thin!" — Bert said to them, but he also was stopped by Ashley.

"Are you crazy or something?! You'll burn!" — Ashley said as she holds Bert's arm. Everyone's just being scared and doesn't know what to do. But our heroes team will deal with everything.

Mess was hiding in the bushes. She wore her glasses and neon circles around her arms and legs. She pointed her fist at Megaman, preparing to fire. But when she heard everyone talking about Rita, she paused.

"Rita...?" — She said quietly, getting also scared for her, so to say, friend.

And Blue Bomber said with a confident look to everyone. — "Don't worry guys we'll find her and save her before the firefighters arrive." — After those words he, Zero and Namagem ran to the doors of the school, but there was an explosion from which they were thrown back. Everyone else got terrified.

While this time, Mess was already inside of the burning school, looking for Rita. She looked at every corner, but Rita was nowhere. Robotic criminal prankster girl was already upset, until she heard the familiar voice from somewhere.

"P-please... Someone, help me..." — Rita was repeating every time in a hoarse voice, coughing as she was sitting on the floor near the lockers.

Mess came running to Rita's voice. She began to approach her, but the red-haired girl barely, but quickly got to her feet and began to resist.

"N-no, go away from me, criminal! Don't touch me! *coughing*" — Rita said, trying to protect herself.

"Hush, hush, I'm not going to hurt you, honestly. I want to help you." — Mess said to Rita, trying to calm her down.

"Why should I believe you?! You're a criminal! You hurting my friends! *coughing* I'm not going to accept a help from a criminal like you!" — The cross-eyed girl was still resisting. She does not hate Mess, she's afraid of her.

Mess understood that Rita doesn't trust her, but she took a deep breath and tried to approach her again. — "Listen, I understand you don't believe me and despising me, but please, let me help you or else you'll burn!" — Robotic girl on rollers said in a calm voice, still trying to reassuring Rita. She stretched her hand to Rita and said. — "Please, just let me help you."

Rita could not understand why the criminal was trying to help her, but due to the situation she was in, she still took Mess's hand. — "Okay, I accept your help... *coughing*"

Mess placed Rita on her back. With her super speed, she began to make her way to the exit, but he was filled up. Worried, she began to look for an emergency exit, and literally a second before he was also filled up, Mess managed to get out.

Trying to catch her breath, Mess put a slightly weakened Rita on the ground. — "Hey, how are you? Are you okay?" — she asked, putting her hand on Rita's shoulder. Although she was well aware that Rita, in any case, had already inhaled smoke and this was not very good.

"*coughing* Yes, I'm fine... Thank you." — Rita answered as she looked at Mess with a slight but thankful smile.

Mess smirked a bit at it. Then she hid in the bushes again since she's still need to fire at her enemies.

By that time, firefighters had already arrived and were putting out the fire.

"We don't know how it happened, but we'll find out. Something tells me it wasn't accidental at all. It's like someone did something on purpose to start a fire." — Namagem said to the main firefighter, suspecting that everything really happened not incidentally.

Meanwhile, Rita approached everyone, covered in dirt and dust. When the guys saw her, everyone was very surprised how she managed to escape, but at the same time everyone was very happy that she was safe. All of Rita's friends rushed to hug her tightly. Three children of superheroes approached this scene.

Megaman, confused, asked Rita — "Honestly, I'm glad you're okay, but I don't understand... How did you escape?"

Rita looked at him and, with the suggestion that no one would believe her, replied — "You won't believe me, but... Mess saved me!"

Everyone, having heard Rita's words, began to blink their eyes in surprise.

"What?! But- It's impossible! That narcissistic egotist is not capable of such a thing!" — Zero exclaimed, annoyed and angry at it. She's definitely doesn't believe in it.

Rita wanted to start proving the truth, but suddenly Megaman got shot at his back. Everyone was shocked and fled in fright in different directions, and only our heroes remained.

Megaman stood up at his feet and got mad. — "Who did this?!" — He exclaimed.

"It's was me!" — Mess said as she appeared in front of their faces with a smug smirk.

"Agh, she's here again." — Zero got annoyed by Mess's another appearance.

Megaman looked at Mess with a mix of annoyance and anger. — "I see you want a fight again, Menace on rollers?" — He said as he pointed his buster towards her.

Mess looked at all three heroes. She grinned and said with a confident and smug look. "Hah, try to catch me first." — And after that, she ran away with a super speed.

The Light siblings heroes began to chasing her and using their weapons, but Mess managed to dodge all the time.

Zero angrily swung her saber at the robotic criminal girl with all her might, but Mess fired a neon circle at Zero, causing Zero to be thrown aside. Then Megaman began to use Elecman schematics and shot at Mess, but the criminal girl dodged and hit Blue Bomber at his stomach, also throwing him aside. Namagem got mad and wanted to take a revenge for his siblings and already wanted to shoot at Mess, but she began to speak to him.

"You know what, Nam, I could spare you, you're an interesting and hilarious guy, but you make the mistake of messing around with these guys. Wouldn't you like to have some fun and take a break from these superhero duties?" — Mess said, looking at Namagem with a slight smirk.

Namagem got confused by Mess's words. But after a few seconds, he come back to his senses and answered. — "Do not try to fool me, vandal, I'm not gonna to listen to your tricks!"

Mess's slight smirk fade away. — "Oh. How pity. I thought you were smarter." — After those words, she began to attack Namagem with her shooting neon circles.

Namagem began to attack Mess back. Once Megaman and Zero came to their senses, they also started attacking Mess along with their brother. Surprisingly, Mess handled the heroes better than usual. She now dodges more and deals more damage than usual. This is very alarming for our guys. But the Light siblings did not give up and continued to fight, but the energies were already running out.

Mess noticed that her enemies getting weaker. She grinned evilly at it and continued to attack them. But after some time of fight, she suddenly got a signal. It's was a signal from her boss's lair. Mess didn't wanted to leave this sweet battle, but she couldn't disobey Captain Darkshade. She sighed and, with all her might, shot at the ground in front of three superheroes that everything around was shrouded in dust.

Megaman, Zero and Namagem began to coughing and, when the dust cleared, they noticed that Mess was no longer there. They began to looking around, but there is no trace left of Mess.

"Where did she go?!" — Zero exclaimed, still wanting to finish this criminal.

"Calm down sis, she's gone already. But it's weird that she just left the fight without a reason. What's wrong with her lately? But of course she will back soon... But anyway, everyone's safe now." — Megaman said to his sister with a sigh.

And Namagem was in confusion. He tried to understand why did Mess was talking to him like that, but nothing came to his mind.

The Light siblings are very tired after this fight. Mess fought much harder than usual. What happened to her is unclear.

After the fire, the school had to be refurbished.

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The next day, the Light kids were walking and discussing what happened yesterday. Chaotique walked with them. She was kinda shocked as she listened to Aki as he recounted what had happened.

"Oh my... I see you had to spend a lot of energy... Mess as always in her repertoire." — Kay-Kay said to Aki, feeling annoyed knowing that Mess again with her tricks.

"Yes... But this time, she fought much harder than usual. This time she deals even more damage. It's kinda strange... We always spent a lot of energy on her, but this time she literally almost knocked us down." — Aki answered to her, feeling that this is weird how much stronger Mess become.

"... Oh... It's unexpected..." — Chaotique said at it as she also felt confused.

All the four kids are continued to discussing about this «Menace on rollers» and a little bit about other members of a criminal group.

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At Captain Darkshade's lair, Mess stood in front of her boss with a serious expression.

Darkshade spoke to her in a less cold tone, almost proud. — "Mess, you did a good job in fighting these children, there is a result, I see this time everything turned out much better than usual. Congratulations. It seems that it was not in vain that I gave you all these serious trainings during these days..."

Mess sighed quietly in relief. She didn't show it, but inside she felt proud because her boss had never praised her like that before. It can be said that he never praised her at all.

"But boss, let me just ask you just one single question... Why do we always leave the battlefield in the middle of a battle? When we can finally finish off these superhero kids!" — Clawswoman spoke up, not understanding why their boss was constantly calling them in the middle of battles.

"Yes boss, why do we have to interrupt the battle right in the middle of it?" — Fogman also said agreeing with Clawswoman. Lou the robotic spider nodded in agreement.

Captain Darkshade looked at the three of them with a slight anger and annoyance.

"I'm the one asking the questions here, in case you forgot. But this time I'll make an exception... With each battle, these superhero kids get more tired, which means they become weaker. And the weaker they get, the more likely they are to be defeated. Very soon we let's finish with their whole family and nothing and no one can stop us! And from tomorrow, we will start preparing hard for this..." — He explained with a sense of self-confidence and a feeling of power.

After these words, he turned to the screens and quietly said to himself. — "Soon all the power will belong to me. And he will realize how wrong he was about me... *evil laughter*"

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To be continued...

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Note after the part: Alrightttttt here's the first part is done👏🏻 To be honest, something tells me that you didn’t expect the actions in fanfiction will begin from those moments :') But it doesn't matter. I know that it probably didn't work out very well, I'm not very good at fanfiction, so there may be some mistakes. But I hope you enjoyed it ^^

Write your suggestions and guesses on this part👀✨

Don't take everything seriously, this post is just a joke, just Lou is hates arachnophobes, since.. he's a spider. Well, you get it.

Melissa is covering up her scar with powder so that no one will guess that she is Mess

My OCs nicknames/alt names

Yes, all my OCs has a some nicknames or, can be said, alt names that other characters in MMFC(my AU ofc) can call them

Mess:

a BIG Mess

Troublemaker

Vandal

Messy-Mess

Menace on rollers

Mess when she's Melissa:

Missy

Lis

Melis

Mellie

Lou the robot-spider:

Louis

Spidey

Little bad spider

Eight-legged troublemaker

Rita Carter:

Ri/Ree

Margarita

Ginger

Claws Woman:

Bounty Hunter (mistaken)

Clawed Assassin (mistaken)

The wolverine

Claw

Terrorism supporter (mistaken)

Predator

Fog Man:

The fog ghost

Fog Therapist

Foggy

"Emo Man"

"Fog Man Addams" (jokingly)

And finally...

Captain Darkshade:

Big Bad Guy

Tyrant

Dark-purple Devil

A Captain Menace

Threat to society

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Well, that's all for now. Hope you like it, and feel free to share your opinions ^^

1. Melissa/Mess:

Age by human standards: 14-16 y.o.

Pronouns: She/Her

Sexuality: Bisexual and demisexual

Voice: Sunset Shimmer from "MLP Equestria Girls"

Best quote: –"Don't mess with Mess!"

Random fact: She feels an interest in Bert, but what kind of interest? This is still not entirely clear

2. Lou:

Age: idk honestly, he's spider, idk which age he can have

Pronouns: He/Him

Sexuality: Biromantic

Voice: I don't know if this counts as a voice, but he communicates by beeping like Morse code

Best quote: –"Q-bob k-beep k-boop, q-bob k-boop k-beep k-beep q-bob k-beep k-beep! (translate: Even though I'm just a spider, I can fly like a butterfly and sting like a bee!)

Random fact: He likes the Spider-Man movies

3. Rita Carter:

Age: 14-15 y.o.

Pronouns: She/Her

Sexuality: Pansexual

Voice: Izzy Moonbow from "MLP New generation"

Best quote: –"Even in the depths of the soul of the nastiest human or robot there is goodness, you just need to look carefully and believe!"

Random fact: She dreams of becoming a singer

4. Claws Woman

Age: 25-30 y.o.

Pronouns: She/Her

Sexuality: Asexual

Voice: Queen Chrysalis from MLP

Best quote: –"Now tell me Mega Man, which do you side with: robots, or humans?"

Random fact: She’s the most traumatized among all my OCs

2nd random fact: Mess, Lou and Fog Man are the only ones Claws Woman allows herself to be touched and and they’re only ones that she does never hurt

5. Fog Man

Age by human standards: 30 y.o.

Pronouns: He/Him

Sexuality: Demiromantic

Voice: Hector from "Coco"

Best quote: –"Fear is like fog, when you are afraid, it wraps around you, and nothing is visible except for it"

Random fact: Unlike my other OCs-antagonists, he has no specific purpose

Which is your favorite? Feel free to share your opinion! ^^

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1. Chaotique x Mess

Yes, of course they are enemies, but there is a dynamic. Mess's constant pranks on Chaotique, or insane pranks trying to show how much better she is than Chaotique, thereby attracting her attention. This ship has a vibes of "Marinette x Lila" ship from MLB. And yes, I don't ship Chaotique x Mess, but I'll leave this here anyway.

2. Aki/Mega Man x Mess

Same situation as Chaotique x Mess. But since Mess hates Mega Man a little less than Chaotique, there is a dynamic too. But also, I don't ship them.

3. Mega Mini x Lou

Yea, male friendship. Their strong friendship is very sweet, but could there be any dynamics here? Why not, of course

4. Melissa x Rita (one of my favorites)

They have quite a lot of dynamics. Melissa, surprisingly, allows Rita to touch her when she won't let anyone else (not counting Bert, of course). Rita often infuriates Melissa, but Rita does not deliberately annoy Melissa, she does not even understand that she annoys her, and Melissa, although angry at all this, does not drive Rita away. Maybe they are good enough friends.

5. Bert x Rita

Redhair duo, yea. They also have enough dynamics, but they are more like just friends.

6. Claws Woman x Fog Man

As I said, Fog Man has warm feelings for Claws Woman, but he is not directly in love with her. He always supports her, and tries to calm her down when she starts to get mad.

7. Mega Mini x Rita (one of my favorites too)

Remember, I said that Rita's constant jokes over Mega Mini can be called a little flirting? Yes, I think their duo is very cute. Rita has an interest in Mega Mini.

8. Hypno Woman x Claws Woman

They were friends in the past, but their friendship ended abruptly when Claws Woman lost her daughter. Claws Woman suddenly began to despise everyone from that day, but even if she does not like Hypno Woman, Claws Woman somehow sometimes becomes sad when remembering her. Maybe they can still be friends...?

9. Mess x Lou

But the pairing is clear, the strong friendship between the prankster girl and robot spider ever since the day Mess saved Lou's life. But there is no z0×phillia here, don't you think! This ship is absolutely platonic!

10. Mess/Melissa x Triboulet/Bert (ofc also one of my favs)

It seems to me that among all that I have written, this ship has the most dynamics. Their sweet attitude towards each other is something. Although from the very beginning, they were enemies! That is, everything between them happened like this: at first they were enemies, then they became partners, and then they became good friends. They have a common enemy and similar goals, they make a good team. Honestly, although they are unlikely to ever be together, this pairing is one of my most favorites <3

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(Mess and Cut Man isn't here because as you already know they don't have dynamics anymore)