#mickey why

I wrote a whole section, and as I was reading it over, I couldn’t help but feel that I’d lost Mickey’s voice. It just didn’t sound like him, and I couldn’t figure out what I’d done wrong. I read it over a couple times and I figured it out. Y’all…Mickey didn’t say “fuck” once in the entire six paragraphs of dialogue. In fact, he didn’t cuss at all. So now I’ve gotta go back and sprinkle in a couple cuss words to try and get his voice back, because at this point in the fic he’s still a defensive, snarky asshole to cover up that he’s scared.

its 5 am and all i see is food on my dash, now im hungry but i cant get food

mickey milkovich: *gets shot in the leg* "you suck!"

WHY WAS MICKEY FUCKING A GIRL?!?! This is my main problem with the episode. He fucking came out, why would he revert back to that? He’s in a fuCKING RELATIONSHIP! wtf