Happy STS! đ How would your characters in their current state react if they were introduced to their original, baseline character concepts? Would they be different enough that itâs like meeting someone completely new, like meeting an uncanny doppelganger, or somewhere in the middle? Iâm always a sucker for seeing how characters grow and develop not only within the course of the physical story, but also how they change and evolve as you go about writing them.
You know, I almost said I was done with STS responses for now...but I have to answer this! What a phenomenal question. Thank you so much for sending this in!
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This is the first incarnation with Briggid, so Iâve decided to instead show her all the drafts where I decided she didnât need to exist. She wasnât amused.
Eleazar is disgusted by the fact that I have now given him what used to be his fatherâs name. But at least heâs a lot more likable and has a personality distinguished from the other protagonists! Iâve given him much more snark and attitude, and shifted his position to something his current iteration would vastly prefer.
Poor Solomon would just be so confused. He would wonder why I could not settle on a race or an age for him. I donât think heâd even recognize his older counterparts! Heck, this now-military commander was once a pacifist. But at least he was always respectable.
Hereâs the thing with Royan: he didnât start off having any powers whatsoever, and you didnât have much of a reason to root for him. Youâd think heâd be grateful for that, but no - he doesnât want powers, unlike literally everybody else. So I clearly cannot please him. But at least I gave him a more suitable hair color and also made him lovable instead of moderately tolerable.
Oeden would be surprised how little his past incarnations have changed in terms of personality and occupation, but how vastly they have changed in literally everything else. He went from white to mixed, from brunette to redhead to auburn-haired, from having eighteen hundred plotlines to a controllable amount. Heâd probably thank me, because this poor boy had waaaaay too much going on for a while there.
Medea would be SO mad at me. This girl has had so little change from her original incarnation because I knew exactly what I wanted to do with her from the beginning. But her OG self had two powers - Life and Death - whereas she only has death now. Her current self would kill to have both! But thatâs why I took it from her. OP, please nerf.
Farukhâs actually stayed pretty consistent, too. The only thing thatâs changed ten thousand times over is who his lover actually ends up being. This man has slept with half of Al-Hasan at this point. I think it would be one of the few things to unnerve him, sadden him even, to realize all the people who could have loved him if things had gone differently.
Kasumi might disown me as an author because I somehow made her family issues even worse than in the older drafts. I didnât know that was possible, but I did. She did keep her butterfly motif, though! And sheâs gotten more powers than just âgood at spyingâ, so thatâs a plus.
I definitely killed off Carmilaâs mom at some point, and she still hasnât forgiven me. At least her newest incarnation isnât as serious and stuffy as her old ones! ...but sheâs a little more childish and temperamental, so.
















