I've been reading The First Quarter Quell fanfic by Littlefroid. I'm currently on chapter 12. It's a good story plot-wise, and it has interesting characters, but the grammar is bad, and I suspect English isn't the author's first language. Also, the author has this odd thing where they omit "I"s and pronouns a lot, including in the dialogue. Because of this, there are always a bunch of sentences that don't feel complete. It makes reading this fanfic confusing at times too. There's also some awkward sentences in this story. And sometimes the author randomly switches to present tense, when this is supposed to be a past tense story.
I like the story overall. I want to make that clear. The problem is that there are some problems with this story.




















