redtulipslove replied to your post: and pleased me more than the real sea
If this is an outtake, I need to prepare for the real thing. Truly beautiful, delightful Oliver thoughts - his impressions of Elio on first sight ring so true. This was just sublime! Thank you ïżœïżœ
Ha. I feel like I need to start a lowering-your-expectations campaign like now for I. Allegro con brio. Because I am an over-reacher by nature, I decided that this series would be in Romantic sonata-as-fic form and Iâve been suffering the consequences ever since. As dictated by the form, I. Allegro con brio has to a) set up the theme of the series and b) be primarily about exposition. So there is nothing about it thatâs crowd-pleasing. Itâs all set-up, taking place in the past where the main romantic pairing havenât met yet in the storyâs present (II. Andante and III. Rondo respectively) and worse, non-linear, and all of that is probably why itâs taking me so long to write. I have to write it so that IV. Finale can mirror it and resolve it appropriately (though that one will be infinitely more crowd-please for reasons) but I also know itâs gonna be one of those work-unbelievably-hard-then-post-cue-crickets type of AO3 jams. I struggle with writing. Itâs a lot of work and I am a big whiner so there we are. ANGST.
BUT. Thank you. Thank you for letting me know you liked this out-take. I love Oliver and getting into his head is always such an interesting exercise in romantic restraint. Something I never would have expected prior to starting this thing.
inthemid80s replied to your post âand pleased me more than the real seaâ
@ghostcat3000 my fave line is the one about O being drawn to people he canât read right away. I just love the thought that E wasnât easy for him to read, and O spent time trying to figure him out.
I am legit OBSESSED with Oliver saying he liked Elio from day one he just hid it better. Obsessed because day one is literally five minutes of zero conversation before passing out, face-down in his sneakers on Elioâs bed. I watched that scene over and over again screaming WHEN and HOW and WHAT. But he said it happened so I believe him. Whatever that impression was--it had impact.