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when powerfantasy crashes, is it usually a crash back to axiom/guesswork or is there an intermediate crashed out state as she comes down from herself?

Ooh that’s such a good question. I have a feeling that maybe Powerfantasy does have a dimmed state where she gains… a sort of atypical clarity in the form of dissatisfaction with her achievements/funds while she’s in-phase. On a similar vein, Small Animal is in fact capable of feeling happiness. But that happiness is swarmed with caveats of dread and disorientation, ultimately making feeling happiness not even her goal. Instead, being unconscious somewhere private is.

I like to think that, depending on on its intensity, PF extinguishes in a gradual dim of a few seconds, a flicker out, or a flashbang.

When Powerfantasy phases out, it can be:

1. Into Axiom in a gradated comedown. Whatever PF was doing, Axiom can see the intent and may continue with a ton of revision. She sees phasing into PF as sometimes worthwhile for her occasional good ideas, but admits she’s not an ideal nor sustainable state for that. Axiom is nonjudgemental of PF beyond collegially evaluating the efficacy of her decisions. Axiom likes her personality as PF, but likes her own personality more.

2. Into Praxis in an abrupt stop. Praxis doesn’t really concern herself with the intricacies of Axiom’s workflow or thinking. Despite this, (or rather, this is because) Praxis trusts Axiom’s judgement. Praxis does not trust PF’s, and grabs the reins as soon as PF crashes while in a position that leaves her particularly vulnerable, such as if in a dangerous environment or with an opportunistic audience. Praxis sees PF as naïve and reckless. PF also gives Praxis worse hangovers than Axiom, who’s at least a little courteous about it.

sorry what did that uninformed preachy motherfucker comment again

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I want to say this fic is really lovely, and for the most part it is. You have a really good structure and it's plain to the reader that you have talent with words. I enjoy your characterization of both Frank and Cable, though I don't see them getting along this way. Sleeping together is one thing, but I doubt they'd have any real interpersonal concern for each other. But that's what fanfiction is all about, everyone having different takes and writing whatever they want.

The only real issue with this fic is that suicide scene. It does nothing for the story, it plays no part in how anything continues, it comes out of nowhere and then is dismissed just as quickly. You could, and really should, delete that entire section without changing anything. There are real people living with chronic pain, and if you bothered to talk to some of those people, I almost guarantee you they would tell you they've never considered killing themselves over their pain, especially not over migraines. People get headaches all the time and suicide is not the go to for anyone. It seems like such a shame to spoil such a sweet, well-told story with a scene like that when it's obviously just there for shock value. I'm going to pass on leaving kudos this time, and hope that you do cut that scene after reading this comment.

I SHOULD HAVE INCLUDED A COMMA i meant did they leave Another comment fhgdhk

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