Final Display Evaluation-
The thoughts on my FMP and final piece, overall (along with any problems I came across when creating my final piece, etc.) can be found in my main evaluation. In this evaluation, I am going to discuss what I feel has gone well in my presentation and what could be improved.
Overall, I feel that the presentation of my final piece has been really effective. It truly highlights the key motifs of my FMP: repetition, mundanity and daily routines, without being over-the-top or too simplistic. My final presentation, highlights the pathway I would like to follow (illustration) whilst demonstrating how much I have grown artistically on the course, through my use of video, collage and creating my own installation.
To improve on my presentation, I would consider the following: -
- Instead of just doing 12 paintings, I would have liked to create an entire wall of paintings, to really showcase my skills and the messages behind my work.
- Another video outlining another common daily routine
- Make a collage of varied work, which each outline a different routine e.g. gym routine, dance routine, shopping routine, etc.
- I would have liked to create graffiti / street art based around my theme, and captured people’s reactions of it – similar to Banksy and his style –as this would’ve truly made my work ‘OUT THERE’
However, I am pleased with my final piece as it is, and any improvements would potentially ruin its overall effect.




















