#fictif hook

I just read Serena’s (hook’s) ending for IOE……I’m kinda disappointed?

I only unlocked one of the paid scenes (I’m going to go back later and get the other one) but even then it was a little short. And there really wasn’t that much of a story either. And besides a few interactions interactions we didn’t even really get to see Billie. I mean we did….but not enough!!

I honestly don’t even know why they put in that scene with Serena and Billie in the last chapter if they weren’t going to follow up with anything. It’s like they included one scene purely because they saw how much we loved Billie. And it feels like more queerbaiting or baiting in general. Now don’t get me wrong, it’s not like you can’t include scenes in your book were you have a romantic/sexual interaction with multiple characters at one time, and then just leave it at that. But with how they set it up? It was saying that Billie cared for us too. And it made out that it was romantically. So now I’m really disappointed. I legit only really read the ending to see Billie. Nothing against Serena, I love her but, I really wanted more of Billie. I really thought by giving us that scene, they were gonna let us romance her as well.

Now I guess she could’ve been in the last paid scene (the one I didn’t unlock), but I doubt it.

So overall, the story was good. But often at times was anticlimactic and slow, yet rushed? I like the characters, though I didn’t get any of Rouge’s paid scenes so, I don’t know too much about this character. And like I said, I’m disappointed by the ending. I’m glad we didn’t have to pay for both this time. But it was boring, ngl.

I would like to see more of the characters later down the line. And I would like a tale with Billie! I mean, if that Liam dude & Sawyer can get one when they weren’t even the main characters, what’s stopping us from getting one with Billie? *cough* she’s a woman *cough*

Anyways, have a cute Serena, MC, & Billie Moment <3

And Bonus that I just found funny:

(SPOILERS FOR ISLE OF ENCHANTMENT)

First off, SHE’S SO PRETTY!!!😭🥺 And I’m so annoyed I can’t romance her.

Hi Ruby from once upon a time, nice to see you again. I’m kidding! But I’m also not. First Rouge showing us his wolverine cospay and impression, and now this? Not very original of you fictif.

I kinda saw that coming. I think it’s kinda cliche but it’s too early for me to really make much of a comment on it I think. I’m interested to see where they’re going to go with this.

Also, I’m actually kinda happy that they mentioned periods?? Like none of the other stories have, and it’s very rare to have it mentioned unless it’s to put menstruating individuals down. But I like that they mentioned and didn’t make it weird.

With Scarlett and Rouge’s wolf forms….wth? They’re so boring! If I think of a person who transforms into a wolf, I think of an actual wolf! Not some person with anger issues, pointy teeth, and bone claws. Seriously. I wanna see full on wolf or beast like the wolf in once upon a time, or even the beast from beauty and the beast. Not whatever this is.

✨HER✨

Now this! I would like to say: THANK YOU BILLIE FOR CARING! So many times it happens in stories (including in places by fictif/the arcana) where something will happen to the mc, usually traumatic, and it’s not even mentioned? Like everyone (mc included) just magically gets over it? It’s not dealt with or brought up ever again? I’m glad they’re allowing the characters to question things and check in with the mc and offer to let them go home.💕

There was another scene with Hook, but my silly butt didn’t screenshot it (and I was not replaying it just for that). But I am also liking showing the realness of how the mc would react after being attacked, by Rouge no doubt. I have unfortunately experienced my own severe trauma and I know how this sorta thing plays out afterwards and, it’s actually a pretty good representation of that. I hope to see more of that sort of writing, where they actually write mc, as well as other characters, feeling and acting in ways they ACTUALLY would act after a traumatic experience. Now obviously there are areas where the writing could of been better but, it’s a start. Especially as not many books actually draw attention to trauma characters would have, and when they do , they do not write it properly.

Female characters I can actually romance and for more than 5 seconds.🥲😒

I mean I was at first, but now? Not really. It was very anticlimactic & ngl you look and sound pretty boring. I like your ears tho.