Hi! I'm writing a story in which the main villains are an African-American royal family. I've done by best to humanize them by giving them the motivation of protecting their family, but I want to avoid any stereotypes and demonizing them based on their race. I have other non-villain characters that are POCs as well, but I feel that it's my responsibility to get all of them right. Any advice helps.
African American Family of Villains
We would love to celebrate having a diverse amount of representation for any identity and experience, but we have to keep reality in mind. The reality that we have to balance our representation with what’s already out there, as we already deal with a lot of bad and harmful rep. With representation like this, it’s important to look at how other characters who share said identity are presented.
Villain/antagonist is in the eye of the beholder
Villains are the hero of their story. They have goals, motivations, and sometimes loved ones. Define what type of villain yours are. Is your villainous family actual bad guys or just getting in the way of the protagonist’s goals? Explore their motivations. Being an antagonist doesn’t necessarily make someone a villain in the big picture.
Not All Villain Types are equal.
From observations in fandom: exaggerated, pure evil villains are less intriguing to readers. A lot of people are into intricate villains with motives beyond just ‘cause. When it comes to Black villains, moving away from stereotypical villainous violence (gang violence being one example) to more complex roles is another thing to consider, the latter being more welcome.
Character example: Fish Mooney in the TV series Gotham (Jada Pinkett Smith) is a Black woman mob boss. While she’s involved in illegal activity and is essentially one of the bad guys of Gotham, in Season 1 she does help her police friend solve cases a lot (on her terms), has goals, and is portrayed as sensual, alluring, powerful and clever. The character is developed beyond a flat everyday criminal character.
[Image above: Fish Mooney in television series Gotham.]
I (Colette) remember seeing on social media how excited Black fans were to receive this character. Me among them! Even as a villain, she was presented with allure and complexity that I craved to see in Black characters. It was nice to be able to personally root for her, even if not everyone in the show would be.
Note: I am no longer up to date on the series past the first season, but this is how she is first presented to us at least. Although, user @thepoisonking says she stays amazing throughout the series!
The Costs of Goals
Your character’s goals seems noble (protecting their family), but what are the costs of the goal? For example, if it involves decisions that hurt others, particularly people the protagonist care about, then it’s obvious why they’re seen as villains. On that note…
Help us understand them
Present the facts. Explaining doesn’t necessarily mean you’re justifying actions. You are simply helping us to understand the why. Whether you purposefully incorporate a sympathetic angle or not is another decision to make, and to make carefully. (For example: A bully torments an innocent character. Explaining how they were bullying victims themselves helps us understand the actions but does not erase or justify the real hurt they have caused others.)
Avoid Tokenism
You say you have other Characters of Colour. This doesn’t really make it okay if all your African American characters are villains and all other said Characters of Colour are not (AA). If you meant you have other AA characters who aren’t villains, then that’s helpful. Create balance, even if they’re sympathetic villains.
~Mods Alice and Colette
Commentary
@leosgrimoireMay I suggest you watch Black Lightning. Almost entirely AA cast, hero’s and villains, and family based
@amityravenclawelfI would add that having the good!AA characters be defined by their receptiveness to helping white people would also be a no-no; the good!AA and the bad!AA need to both have motivations independent from white characters.
















