back to editing we go! starting from page 93, like last time lol. The fic is 129 pages long btw! I checked. Alright, now for the commentary. Minimal context: Unbirthday Party just concluded
...hmmm... minor problem... I feel like one of the scenes is getting dragged out. It's not bad, but it's enough that I noticed. Do I take the time to fix it? ...if i asked my friends, they'd probably say yes. Plus, I'm near the end anyway.
Grammarly isn't doing its job. Apparently, the doc is too long for it to work properly (it is 266 pages in total... it includes deleted scenes and scrap lol). Thankfully, regularly autocorrect has somehow kicked in and i'm grateful. it's catching stupid mistakes
god, usually, I'm pretty good at figuring out synonyms, but what is a synonym for familiar? ...oh, memorable? that should work. Noice!
hmmmm... must cut down some of it. There's a lot of repetition in this section.
Awwwwwwww, this line is so cute!!... “I have no idea how I managed to date you,” Riddle comments, while cuddling against your body.
Oh nooooooo. NOooooooo. WHY??? *puts a hand on forehead like Trey does when certain things happen in the fic... multiple times... (I feel faint lol)* But serious, no. I thought I had this!!! I don't. *sigh* At least I fixed the other section.
False alarm! I asked my boyfriend if I wrote a good insult earlier, and he said, "damn," so I think it's satisfactory lol
ok... ok... we're working on it. i edited a small reaction part. thankfully, nothing devastating.
Oh, wow. I forgot Reader always has a prewritten text ready to send to Trey when the couple visits Riddle's mom. Damn, responsible Reader
I love how Reader works out and builds muscle to carry Riddle princess-style. Iconic. Reader is very cool
God, I hope I don't have to edit the 3rd smut scene. That'd be inconvenient for me.
Bro, I only got to page 96 before dying. Gotta finish it tomorrow! Ahhhhhh. Wish me luck