Hello! Some errors I noticed.
Is this the end of chapter 1? Because I'm stuck on this paragraph.
I like the new chapter. I felt the tragedy of the moment when the main character could not hold Haida's hand. :( Shopping on the market is a more pleasant text or will it affect the hobby of ms?
Thanks! Will fix them. Downside in working with Word that it capitalises words I don't want it to.
No idea why the "Back into the shadows" doesn't work but yes it's the end of the chapter. After it just comes a 'end of demo'-page. There's multiple ends to the chapter and for some the link works 🙈
Shopping is a way to get a new headscarf if you want, or get something else nice for yourself. It may or may not play part in the future. (Except for one thing with the seller who's a little off.) I'm still debating wether or not implement an inventory as for most of my planned game it will have no effect except for the player to remember what they have. Plotwise it's mostly irrelevant.
Thanks for the ask and finding errors! I did listen to lot of sad songs while writing the tunnels and the different endings to saying goodbye. Good that it had impact as intended 🥲