#dragonflame64

Indeed. I was actually making a whole post for it but I’ll write it here. The overall story stays the same just the elements change

Nothing to drastic, there's probably more but here's what I got. (Undercut won't work for me) The clans are now the colonies. Thunder Colony, Shadow Colony, Wind Colony, River Colony, and don’t forget Star Colony. Bloodclan stays Bloodclan however. River Colony and Shadow Colony leaders have -moon instead of star due to their greater connection to the moon. Thunder and Wind keep the -star through. Windclan and Shadowclan apprentices don’t have -paw. Kittens don’t have -kit at the end of their names anymore River and Wind are often Royal leadership. Shadowclan is 50/50 while Thunder is leader-deputy most of the time. I actually added the overseers and messengers finally. Just fixing the lore a bit but nothing to crazy. I also added head royals and pelt-makers are now called craft-claws. I’m working on Chapter 9 of book 3 as I edit. So nothing’s really on hold like last time. Thunder Colony cats wears gold on some part of their body. Thunderclan leaders wear golden necklaces with gems the color of their eyes. Shadow Colony like swearing clothes and other human stuff they can use. They also use bones for decoration and rituals. River Colony loves their gems. Riverclan leaders wear crowns with gems of their eyes. Wind Colony is the most ‘modest’ colony. The few gems they use are for clan culture purposes and nothing more. Traditions: After a new leader receives their lives, they wear a piece of the moonstone for at least two moons to help absorb Star Colony’s power. Thunder Colony apprentices must fight for their warrior names, they sit vigil afterwards. New River Colony warriors go on the Great Night Swim and must return with as much of black fish as proof. Wind Colony apprentices have dandelions on their fur constantly, they shake them off when they complete their training. New Shadow Colony warriors stand guard in the daytime for their vigil.

Minor notes/Family tree: Graypool is now Grayfeather of Wind Colony. Reedfeather demanded at least one of his kits so Gray is in Wind Colony Splashsong, Swanlight, and Morningbreeze are born and Mudfur is still their father, however Morning chose to stay in Windclan while Swan and Splash left. Mudthorn and Emberdawn are now characters. Mudthorn is Mudbelly’s son from a relationship with a kittypet and Emberdawn is now part of the MallowFrog family in the same litter as Moss and Silver. Aged down Lilystem and made her Rippleclaw’s mate. Strikeheart is a RaggedstarxFoxheart kitten. Yes this was purely to spite Yellowfang (Murkfang) Flowerdusk and Tawnywhisker are ThrushpeltxBluestar kittens.

Thunder Colony

Pinestar was the kit of Cloudberry and Oakstar from a political alliance after Ravenwing’s death. Deerdapple is the mother of Doestar and Deerpaw. Doestar is the mother of Rabbitleap who’s the father of Ambershine. Ambershine and Torndust had Redtail and Spottedleaf and adopted Willowpelt around 4 moons. Mistpelt is the mother of Daisytoe. She adopted Blazenose at 1 moon old after a kittypet raid. Pinestar and Blazenose (Flashnose) had Swiftbreeze. Hollypelt and Smallwhisker (Smallear) wanted kits but weren’t in a relationship. Fuzzypelt was the result of this. Larksong and Flamenose are the parents of Sunstar and Featherwhisker. Beetail is the father of Squirrelwhisker who with Eaglestorm are the parents of Windflight and Woollytail. Petaltail is the mother of Stormtail and Stonepelt. Smallear and Rockfall are littermates. Harepounce and Stagleap had Speckletail. Tawnyspots and Rainfur had Thrushpelt. Tawnyspots got with Leopardfoot and had Miststrike, Nightshade, and Tiger-roar. Swiftbreeze, Adderfang, and Littlestep had Patchpelt and Leopardfoot. Sweetbriar and Shrewpounce (oc) are the parents of Fallowsong who is the mother of Poppydawn. Poppydawn and Windflight had Sweetheart and Thistleclaw, Rosetail was adopted into the family at 1 moon old. Sunstar and Speckletail had Goldenflower and Lionheart. Sparrowpelt and White-eye had Birchstep and Mousefur. Dappletail and Stormtail had Featherstone and Cricket-throat as their first litter and Fogtail as their second litter. Robin and Nutmeg joined Thunder Colony at 9 moons old and were apprenticed to Thrushpelt and Bluemoon respectively. Bluemoon and Thistleclaw had Mossthorn and Buzzkit (who died of greencough.) Bluemoon and Thrushpelt had Flowerdusk and Tawnywhisker. Archeye and Willowpelt had Darkstripe and Lightpaw. RobinRoseFuzzyPatch had Chestnutclaw, Dustpelt, Cherrycloud, and Raveneye. The little group adopted Fogtail prior through. Redtail and Birchstep had Sandstorm and Sparrowpaw (killed by greencough). Brindleface joined the relationship and they had Thymeroot and Rootpaw. Mossthorn had a fling with a kittypet named Joel and had Embereyes as the first litter and Cinderfreeze and Smokefur as the second litter. Thrushpelt and Featherwhisker wanted kits and Willowpelt offered as a surrogate and they had Graystripe and Cranewing. Sweetheart and Patchpelt had Seedspots. Frostbite and Lionheart had Brackenfur, Lichenstrike, Thornpaw, and Brightpaw. Willowpelt had a fling with Tornear and had Smoke, Rose, Ebony, and Owl.

Shadow Colony

Stonetooth is the father of Crowtail and Archeye. Crowtail and Darkwing (Mousewing) had Clawface and Nightpelt. Archeye and Willowpelt had Darkstripe and Lightpaw (who was killed by wolves). Archeye and Hollyflower had Stonesnap and Barktail. Clawface and Rowanberry had Cinderfur and Toadpelt (Stumpytail). Nightpelt had Darkflower and Frogtail. Amberleaf had Brackenfoot. Barkleap (Deerleap) had Mudfoot. Littlebird and Lizardfang had Lizardstripe. Cedarstar and Featherstorm are littermates. Featherstorm had a fling with Hal and had Raggedmoon and Scorchfang. Silverflame and Redthistle had Blazeflower. Blazeflower and Brackenfoot had Yellowfang as their first litter and Rowanberry and Nutwhisker as their second litter. Hollyflower met a kittypet named Black and had Flintfang, Fernshade, and Blackfoot. Toadskip and Nettlespot had Wolfstep and Foxheart. Then Poolcloud joined the relationship and they had Cloudpelt and Littlekit. Marshshadow and Cloudpelt had Whitethroat. Lizardstripe and Mudfoot (Mudclaw) had Barkfoot (Deerfoot), Tangleburr, and Palecloud (Runningnose) as their first litter. Lizardkit and Cedarkit as their second litter. Whitemoss (OC) had Blizzardwing and Sagewhisker. Blizzardwing and Featherstorm had Dawncloud as their first litter, Vole and Moss as their second litter, Sage as their third. Ashclaw and Dustspots (Oc) had Newtspeck and Gravelheart (Ash-heart). Newtspeck and Barkfoot had Wetfoot, Brownwhisker, and Littlecloud. Tangleburr had Appletooth and Poppytail. Dawncloud and Finchflight have Swamp, Elm, Bog, and Blossom.

Wind Colony

Palebird and Leafshine are sisters, daughters of Whiteberry and Rootsong (OC). Pale and Leaf were the couple’s late in life litter. Redclaw is the son of Flamepelt. Heatherstar and Highbreeze (OC) had Hawkheart and Lilywhisker. Lilywhisker and Crowfur had Deadfoot. Hawkheart and Lakefur (OC) had Mudfur. Sandgorse and Dawnstripe are kits of Sunleap and Hazelpelt. Palebird and Sandgorse had Duskstar. Palebird later got with Woollytail and had Wrenflight, Flysnap, Bristleclaw, and Rabbit-tail. Dawnstripe had Appledawn. Plumclaw had Darkfoot. Meadowslip and Hickorynose had Sorrelflight and Pigeonwing. MeadowHickoryCrow happened so Sorrel, Pigeon, and Dead see each other as siblings. Stagleap is not related to Doespring or Ryestalk, However, Doe and Rye are littermates since Mousemist (Mistmouse) and Hareflight are their parents. Duskstar and Barkface adopted Ashfoot around 3 moons. Ashfoot and Deadfoot don’t see each other as family and weren’t raised to. Cloudrunner and Aspenfall had Whitetail and Webfoot. Ryestalk had a fling with Marshcloud and had Runningbrook. Larkfoot (Larksplash) and Grasstail had Morningflower as their first litter and Thrushwing and Stoneclaw as their second litter. Wrenflight and Stagleap had Weasel and Hare

River Colony

Silverstream

Runt and smallest of his littermates.

Looks the most like Willowbreeze

Questions if his father mated with Mallowtail. “How can we look like twins and not be related? I’m on to both of you” “Silverstream we didn’t do anything” “Lies!” “Silver-“ “Tell me what they’ve done Frogleap”

Loves hearing Graypool’s stories about her mother.

They’re pretty close with Bluestar.

Best friends with her former mentor Sedgecreek. They pulled plenty of pranks and had fun in the whirlpools.

Got the -stream suffix because of his personality.

Genderfluid and Bi bi bi

Silvertide

Closer with Mosspelt than Otterstrike. Not just because of the age gap but also their personalities don’t mesh well. He respects Otterstrike a lot but they’re both fine with the current relationship they have.

Hates his eye scar and hates Leopardclaw even more. He knows he was right.

Bonded pretty well with his former mentor: Mudbelly.

Larger than Mosspelt and loves to tease her about it.

He also calls bullshit at Fallowtail and Stormstar. “Mother, I know you and father have your ‘antics’ with other cats on occasion however it’s important to be honest about it who it is” “Silvertide how do you even know about that?” “I have my ways now admit me and Silverstream are related” “Silvertide”

Gay disaster.

Got the -tide suffix because of swimming skills and it was also to match Silverstream’s name as well.

Here’s what they look like with and with out hair plus added flower and Silvertide’s eye scar from Leopard. Not really meant to be any type of flower since I couldn’t really find ones that fit.

With these two and Ice it’s like they could take over the world or destroy it, or both.

I love Frostbite so much and Swanlight has grown on me so much. Nutmeg can go fuck herself honestly.

(Note: Mossthorn is non-binary and uses they/them pronouns)

Mossthorn is very foul-mouthed. Bluestar and Thistleclaw being their parents doesn’t help at all. Sunstar mentored them and taught them the art of holding in anger but being subtle.

Goldenflower cursed a ton in her apprenticeship but she’s cooled down since then and doesn’t want the kits to be corrupted.

Yeah I know it’s hilarious as hell. Robinwing not being clanborn and understanding clearly what Icepaw is saying makes it more fun to fuck with her.

Ice coming from Bloodclan has so much potential and it needs to be used more.

Tiger is going to be something.

Icepaw doesn’t like to take shit from cats he doesn’t respect, it’s hard to earn it. Earn his trust and respect then up you can talk shit until then you can shut the hell up.

Thanks dragon. It’s still a mess but I’m managing to fix it all.

Yeah I like this version of Princess and Luna instead of plain nice. Jake is actually present in his kits lives.

Ravenpaw is and always will be a mess. Who his family is doesn’t help, Rosetail is the only real positive family in his life.

Icepaw’s a mess and I love him.

Thanks, Dragonflame64.

Icefire’s deputyship is going to be a time which will be fun for me.

Redtail is certainly something for the plot and Icefire’s mental health.

Silvertide is best friends with Silverstream and is raised in Riverclan where affection between lovers and friends is blurred. He doesn’t know what shame is.

Silvertide x Icefire ship name is IceTide or SilverIce .

Bluestar can be very observant with these things. She’s been there so she has no room to judge and she openly acknowledges her kits and past mates. Bluestar supports all kinds of chaos because if she didn’t things in the clans would be very boring.

Rabbit

A mama’s boy

Mentored by Ryestalk, Him and Mudclaw tend to butt heads (Ryestalk and Doesping aren’t his aunts in my rewrite)

Doesn’t understand how Icefire can be so proud of his Kittypet heritage and his half-clan relationships. He tries to to be calm around Shadowclan cats but he loses his cool when around Wetfoot, Badgerfang, and Whitethroat. They were they ones who attacked him

He keeps his relationship with Ice a complete secret.

Hates his eyes, it makes him unattractive by Windclan standards.

He isn’t completely out of the closet.

Tries to be a good older brother to Sandypaw

Black

Loves all his kits but his favorite might be Elderberry and Rowan.

Hopes to do his best to make sure Shadowclan doesn’t fall like they did during Brokenstar

Was mentored by Brokenstar

Him, Tiger, and Leopardfur were somewhat close as apprentices.

Bigger than most Shadowclan cats

Does want to be leader but wants to earn it properly

Hates and loves his extra toes

Rosetail and Thrushpelt watch him and shit talk him constantly. He can’t get rid of them.

Currently mates with Goldendusk and Littlecloud after a long long talk of understanding each other.

Loves his eyes and pelt with make him very attractive by Shadowclan and Riverclan standards.

Might have a thing for Stonestorm.

He has two teeth in his right ear, one is from Hollyflower and the other is from himself after he replaced the old on from Brokenstar.

Close with his former apprentice Pinewhisker.

He often gets covered in mud because of Shadowclan’s marsh territory. Cats tend to forget that he’s supposed to be white.

Kit murdering simulator, I love it and that sums it up.

I didn’t like how Brokenstar was defeated in the first book or how it was by only Thunderclan. If more plot points weren’t important I would’ve kept him longer like around Rising Storm or A Dangerous Path.

Icebelly builds connections like nobodies business.

Blackfoot is fun to write isn’t he.

Cinderpaw’s accident was going to happen no matter what. In this way it’s from bravery and adrenaline from battle than stubbornness. (Note: Cinder in this universe is non-binary and uses they/them pronouns)