AESTHETIC QUALITY: 23/30
❝your performance was truly moving--a spectacle that touched the heart and held my attention. the display of samurott’s journey onscreen was a wonderful added touch, although sometimes i felt that it overshadowed the pokémons’ action during the first half of the performance. you went for bold choices, although i think you could have put a bit more power into some of the move combinations, especially at the end--i like to be left feeling overwhelmed by the climactic combinations, and the performance didn’t deliver exactly that. still, though, it was a sight to see. you should be proud.❞
TECHNICAL MASTERY: 24/30
❝you put on a great display of dynamism from all of your pokémon--the whole thing was expertly timed and choreographed. your pokémon showed much of their power, and even a little bit of finesse, which i was very pleased by. i think you could have been somewhat more complex, but you’ve done a good job as is.❞
ADHERENCE TO THEME: 22/30
❝the show was a stunning, touching tribute to your samurott and simipour, and in some aspects of it, it was a display of how you helped both of those pokémon through their trauma as well. i do think you could have been much more involved, however, especially since this performance was supposed to be about the trainer rather than the pokémon. your singing, though, was wonderful--on point.❞
ORIGINALITY: 23/30
❝i loved the unique twist that you gave by directly showing the events that transpired--it must have been very hard for you to put that together and to show such personal information to the public, and so i commend you for not only your originality but also your bravery. i also loved how you turned the misty terrain ring-shaped with the aqua ring--that’s something i’ve not seen done before. once again, though, i think you could have put a bit more into your move combinations.❞
BONUSES AND ANTI-BONUSES
❝you receive +10 for implementing a suggestion that i gave you in the previous round, and +10 for using two pokémon that i have used--gorebyss and primarina.❞
❝Daisy, your total is 112 POINTS!❞
@deerlingrps
