Hi Shay, i just wanted to say that i absolutely loved the new hard knocks chapter!!!
I love that you gave the reader a backstory and i really love how you made her a younger sibling, how it reflects dean's experience but from the other perspective and allows both of them to see things in a different way.
You've done such a good job at making them perfect for each other, their chemistry is soo good and the progression of their relationship is so natural that it feels literally real.
I can't wait to read the next part AAAA you're such an amazing writer!!ππ
(This series better have a happy ending btw i know where you live)
you angel!!! the whole series is literally based on one image i had in my head of dean falling for someone who is a younger sibling and it making him see sam's perspective on a lot of things bc those two boys talk so much shit but always skirt around the point lol. but i also wanted to explore dean's instinct to protect people and watch it clash with someone who already has experience with that instinct in a sibling the same way sam does. and like that person knowing that it's suffocating but that they also need it at the same time bc it's the only way they've experienced real love and devotion. sooo all this to say THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PICKING UP ON THAT i love you π€