#crybabyrp

shoutout~

Alright so I’m 100% in love with Melanie ?? So I love the concept !! I also love how simple the theme looks. It’s very nice and just pleasant to look at.. Not going to lie I’ve looked at this roleplay before as I’ve seen it in the tags. I’m also always a hoe for subplot rps !! The thing is that I feel like the songs have so much potential for amazing subplots but you kind of just let them fall a bit flat, which is actually why I didn’t apply the first time I saw your roleplay. Subplots are supposed to be super dramatic and provide a bunch of potential angst. For example, Training Wheels is a couple who have their problems figured out. When I listen to the song, I think of a couple who’s trying to make it work with the crappy cards they’ve been given which leads to fights, near breakups, threatening to leave, but there’s always a reason they stay. Whether it be they can’t afford to live on their own or they think they can mend it, who knows ?? I just think that your subplots could easily improve and it would get you a whole lot more attention. Melanie provides great plot options and I feel like you guys could take more advantage of that than you have. If you would like some help with plots, I’d be more than happy to help you out !! I’d also try to incomperate some muses into more than one plot !! Give them a reason to all interact. Overall, this would be a rec for me easily if the subplots were just a bit more interesting and provided more angst. Please at least like this when you’ve seen it !!