#creative writting

Roses are red

my heart is too

Marching on its own beat

thumping through

broken to many times

torn and abused

I reflect and try

yet I'm constantly being used

If roses are red

why don't they bleed?

splattering their colours

underneath

staining the ground

with its reverent tears

Dying the soil with

with anger and turmoil

to last years

Roses are red

and their thorns are green

edge cutting

cruel and mean

protectung the flower from harm

keeping it away from outsiders

but portraying charm

Why couldn't my thorns keep me safe?

that's what they're made for

my heart still fragile

and bril

collapsing from silence

No your absence...

Still

Roses are red

Just like the day we met

Red flowing through my face

my clothes, my shoes

my hair, my nails

All red cause you said it looked best

You said it was my colour

damn the rest

then my world turned red

for a whole new reason

rage from betrayal

Red fading fast

Roses no longer red

but turned to black

wilting from the love

I finally finished chapter 2! About 6,000 words to read now! If you're interested the link is right here!

If you click on it thank you for the support. I'm not looking for criticism or anything like that 👍 just simply getting my story out there.

Based on how nice they sound, look, meaning and/or general aesthetic nice=ness

Serendipity

Comradery

Tremor

Contemporary

Chuffed

Provocative

Epizeuxis

Canonical

Antithetical

Nonplussed

Consortium

Defenestrate

Ineffable

Sprocket

Incandescent

Concoct

Serenade

Terse

Eucalyptus

{ignoring y'all, many people have suggested fonts, but that's really disruptive to change mid-typing and deciding who is what font and figuring out who is even speaking, a new person, different person or the same, what is their personality-}[and if-i mean especially since we will change mid typed thought] {all of this to say, and demonstrate, that perhaps using brackets to denote a specific 'voice'-} [as in opinion] {-and general vibes is potentially more efficient}.

Is it more clear for the external reader though? [Well, that's the tradeoff isn't it, and why different fonts could make it easier, it'd be potentially possible to go back in post and change the font buuuut] That would be a lot of work on our part and, again, picking who is what font is a Whole Thing [correct!] So that would potentially be the way to go if we're making a more polished piece but not for a shit post {or, I guess post we don't want to/don't have the energy to put a ton of work into} [plus some people would probably appreciate the rawness of it, less, uhhh, more...] More like a messy story draft, or hasty reference doodles for a more polished art piece {I was gonna add something but I forgot, also we not to sleep, out whatever for tags and then get ready for bed o}(r I'll eat y'all's faces figuratively) hi Sean (hi go to bed)

(stop editing this just post it and go to bed you're tired and so are we)