#compprompt7

I chose my topic while I as watching TV and I saw the commercial that I chose. While I was writing my paper I struggled with adding depth. The commercial I chose didn't really give me many options to expand on certain ideas because it was so short. If I could go back I would choose something a little longer to analyse so that I could go deeper in my evaluation.

IN ORDER TO DO THIS PAPER I HAD TO BREAK IT DOWN IN TWO PARTS, INFLUENCE OF HIP HOP AND A SPECIFIC ARTIST TO TALK ABOUT. I FIGURED THE BEST TOPIC TO WRITE ABOUT WOULD BE MUSIC BECAUSE IT’LL PROVIDE A LOT OF CONTEXT. I HAD A LOT OF SUCCESS BEING ABLE TO WRITE ABOUT THE ARTIST. IF I COULD CHANGE ANYTHING ABOUT THE PAPER IT WOULD BE THE REPLACEMENT OF SOME SHORT SENTENCES.