#comma fails

LOOK ALERT: Apart from the demeaning term “girl power” used in the coloured slug and in the main text to refer to the State’s two adult female political leaders, this is another instance of a misplaced comma and a missing comma that would have helped the sentence meaning to be quickly understood. The sentence following the slug could have been better written: Queensland leads the nation with two women in its most senior political leadership roles and, to celebrate International Women’s Day, our highest-profile female leaders tell what it’s like to be shaping the modern world.