@jadesabre301Ā replied to your post:Ā āso Iāve been tagged a couple times in thatĀ ālast sentence of your WIP,...ā
SOLIDARITY
that is how all my sentences look like
although I do find it interesting to see yours looking like that because I associate you with a much more broken-up style. Like, your style gets stuck in my head.
ha
fun fact, all my sentences are either 80 works long with 15 commas or they are three words, and in both cases they are probably paragraphs all on their own. There is frequently no in-between.
It also depends a lot on POV character, like. Aveline is very abrupt, Theia is less so, obviously. Sebastian and Adelaide mostly only wax endlessly about each other but not anything else and Erana and Blackwall are both surprisingly poetic. I havenāt quite figured out Solas yet, itās why in all the WIPs Iām mostly writing about him from Erana or Blackwallās POV. (And while I figured out Maia Ryder, I cannot get a handle on ANYONE else in ME:A so.) Someday I may actually finish a fic again? But maybe not a BioWare fic? IDK.Ā
I still want to write a Spirit Monk/Sagacious Zu fic for you, but it seems unlikely.
(I also occasionally stare at the Scarecrow and Mrs King epilogue notes Iāve written and am caught between intense 30yo shipping feels and a *handwave* of despairĀ ācause who the fuck besides me wants to read that?)
anyways
#writing is the weirdest hobby?
@phdfanĀ replied to your post:Ā āso Iāve been tagged a couple times in thatĀ ālast sentence of your WIP,...ā
I kind of love that sentence as is!
thank you! I do enjoy my excessive paragraph sentences immensely, even if they are usually less atrocious on the final pass :D
@cmdrfenrisĀ replied to your post:Ā āyou knowI always feel like crap after I get a flu shot itās never...ā
I get ill for several weeks after taking the flu shot, with flu like symptoms. One of the draw-backs of autoimmune disease. Have the have the vaccination that makes me ill to stop me from getting even more ill.
ugh. so ugh. (Though that is obviously part of why I get mine, because I can. *hugs*)
@servantofclioĀ replied to your post:Ā āyou knowI always feel like crap after I get a flu shot itās never...ā
Mine was okay at first but then ached a few days afterward. Sigh. I'm sorry you're feeling crappy! <3
Why thank you. <3 (IT was mostly shark-week this time, so I am feeling much better now.)
@teaandinanityĀ replied to your post:Ā āSo Iām thinking of writing a Malec Persuasion AU for NaNo this year...ā
I am not in this fandom but YES ALL THE PERSUASION AUS!!!
PERSUASION MAKES EVERY BETTERĀ
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